haiku (winter seamstress weeps)
lightning haiku7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku about lightning, Winter Seamstress Weeps, takes a unique approach to explaining the visual effect of lightning against the 'ebon tapestry'. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2015
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This haiku about lightning, Winter Seamstress Weeps, takes a unique approach to explaining the visual effect of lightning against the 'ebon tapestry'. Nice poem.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2015
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Thank you Bill!
Comment from visionary1234
Loved your glorious image of the fingers tearing through 'ebon' tapestry - a novel use of the word, for sure! And personally, I LOVE personification within haiku. Well done!
:)S
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Loved your glorious image of the fingers tearing through 'ebon' tapestry - a novel use of the word, for sure! And personally, I LOVE personification within haiku. Well done!
:)S
Comment Written 21-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you! That's great you liked it. THIS one only took one day ;)
Comment from Neonewman
Great artwork you have chosen to accompany this wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered. Great entry for this lightning contest writing prompt.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Great artwork you have chosen to accompany this wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered. Great entry for this lightning contest writing prompt.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 21-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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God bless you too! Thank you!
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
_ This is an excellent prompt entry.
_ Awesome picture of lightning to complement you haiku.
- Great presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Hi,
_ This is an excellent prompt entry.
_ Awesome picture of lightning to complement you haiku.
- Great presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Hi Jax. LOVE the name again. Love seeing your reviews. Thank you so much!
Comment from Curly Girly
Your haiku appears to meet the criteria for the contest.
winter seamstress weeps
crooked fingers tear light through
ebon tapestry
Best wishes with your entry.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Your haiku appears to meet the criteria for the contest.
winter seamstress weeps
crooked fingers tear light through
ebon tapestry
Best wishes with your entry.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Hi Curly Girly, always love seeing your name :)
Thank you so much!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an excellent entry into the haiku - lightening writing prompt contest. The picture is perfect to enhance the few words that are cleverly composed. Well done on this enjoyable read and definitely good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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This is an excellent entry into the haiku - lightening writing prompt contest. The picture is perfect to enhance the few words that are cleverly composed. Well done on this enjoyable read and definitely good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you! What a stellar review. I'm genuinely honored. Thank you.
Comment from kittykatnoel
A beautiful haiku. I love the picture and the words you have put with it. The whole ensemble is so striking. I like the middle line, fingers tearing light through. Excellent visual.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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A beautiful haiku. I love the picture and the words you have put with it. The whole ensemble is so striking. I like the middle line, fingers tearing light through. Excellent visual.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Oh wow what a nice review! I'm honored! Thank you kitty!
