Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku about lightning, Lightning Strikes My Heart, travels its own path with this challenge and goes for the internal. Groovy graphic and a lower case 'i' in the center line. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015

Thanks for the review Bill. I took being hit by lightning as an empowering event, cheers judester

Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

good morning

I found the entry original
the words are clever
this was a different slant on the topic
well done
truly
the format is more than fine

thank you for sharing your talent
best of luck with the contest
ann marie

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015

Thanks for the insightful review. I appreciate your thoughts on this one cheers

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine haiku for the contest
exact syllables at 5-7-5 gives S/L/S
Good connection between line
and concrete imagery in lightning/I stand
Nice satori line
Excellent art work
Well done
Good luck

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Thanks for the encouraging review. I went through some bad stuff lately, but I am going to glow in spite of it, cheers

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

What a cool piece of artwork you have chosen. This certainly pairs well with this wonderfully crafted piece you have entered. Best of luck in the contest my friend.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015

Isn't it the perfect illustration for this haiku? moonwillow is the artist. I went through some bad times lately, but I am going to glow in spite of it. Thanks for the review, cheers

reply by Neonewman on 18-Nov-2015

Bad times are necessary in the growth of our wisdom unfortunately. Proud of you for moving forward.