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Appreciation Celebration

This is my interpretation of Happy Thanksgiving!

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Comment from Eric1
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Hi Mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition , a wonderfully written poem and nonet of celebration of life, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    Thank you for your kind words and writing review compliments. Enjoy your evening.
reply by Eric1 on 18-Nov-2015
    You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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This is a nice nonet, simple, giving thanks for everything given by God, family and friends. We should always remember to give thanks, and you have done it nicely in this well worded contest entry. Good luck. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    Thank you for this nice review. Enjoy your evening.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This is a well done nonet with the timely theme of Thanksgiving. The message is good, the syllable count is correct. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    Thank you for this great review. Your kind words are appreciated!
Comment from Nosha17
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A simple prayer of thanks like the one in the illustration would suffice. People do take things for granted. Well chosen words and great message. Good luck in the contest, faye

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    Thank you, so much, Faye. Your terrific review is well appreciated!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought this was well written. I love how you ended this poem with "thanks". I like the structure of the poem how it starts with a sentence and ends with one word. Very creative and well written.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    Thank you for this wonderful review. I really enjoyed writing this and I am happy that you liked it!
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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Hello poet friend. We have so much to be thankful for, especially for our salvation. Nice poem. Thanks for using my artwork, Loyd

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    Hello, as well! Thank you for your wonderful review and for allowing me to incorporate this perfect photo into my poem. I don't believe there was one more suited to add to the message of being thankful! I must also add, that my fiance is convinced you fit a perfect image to his grandfather. LOL! Enjoy your evening!
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 18-Nov-2015
    Well hello again, I am honored. I hope the likeness to your grandfather is good? lol You are very welcome.
    I also have many written works here on Fanstory.com, might I invite you to take a look when you have more time? Thanks!
    Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 18-Nov-2015
    Well hello again, I am honored. I hope the likeness to your grandfather is good? lol You are very welcome.
    I also have many written works here on Fanstory.com, might I invite you to take a look when you have more time? Thanks!
    Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
Comment from Jacob Collins
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I think it is the simplest things that mean a lot to us in life that we should give thanks for, our health, our friends and our family. I thought that this was a nicely written piece, mystery writer, I couldn't find any faults and I thought that your writing flowed well. Good luck in the contest...Jacob

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    Thank you for your warm wishes and for this wonderful review! Your compliments are quite appreciated!