Comment from CammyCards

Good

Thank you for your message of sympathy. However, there are a number of mistakes. I imagine you wrote it in quite a hurry.
Eifle should read "Eiffel" and the "too" I think should read "to". "Appart" should read either "a part" if you mean taking part in, or "apart" if you mean away from.
Thank you for using my picture to illustrate your work.
CammyCards

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016

Thank you for correcting my mistakes. And your honest review.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

Oh dear, a memorable honeymoon for the wrong reasons. I pray they were well enough away from the troubles. The sad thing is now there is no peace in Paris as everyone is on edge. Well written etheree, best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016

thank you for taking the time to review my poem.

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Prayers she and her groom will get safely out of there. Indeed the problem is global. It would have been better nipped in the bud, but instead it has blossomed and spread. Best to you with the entry.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016

They are home and safe thank you.