Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

It looks like this poem is a continuation of a compilation of the theme on Jay. It must be quite therapeutic to keep these thoughts turned out to the world and not spinning around inside. Lots of room for editing, unless the sense of 'first thoughts' is important. Happy days.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015

<><><><><><>"My Poison PEN!"<><><><><><><><>
By Ricky 1024
"To edit he doth say as I am again ...
'ON my merry 'Writing WAY! "
"Too much words that scurve and sway!"
"So, I could care less of my errrrr5476 words today!'
...
"With this poison of pen!'
"I'll screw it up to the delight of cruel and insidousus
writer Amend!'"
"'So, grant me a 2 of stars Cause I live on Planet MARS!"
LOL!!
Thanks for that on Jay and Yes your are correct sir. "
Ricky 1024

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

One of the hardest things a parent may ever have to do is bury a child.

Seems so unnatural.

Should be the other way around.

Is a pain never relinquished.

Poem illustrates take everything to God and He will provide the strength to carry on, even in this, one of life's most painful situations.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015

Pain in my leg, my brain, and my heart...
How can I ever live , give, and receive thee pain?
Perhaps I'ill through in a few errors like sweat of dash?
And then again, I'ill get less stars and blast off on my pen
to the planet called MARS!
LOL!
Thanks, for your kind and understanding thoughts.
Ricky 1024.