Comment from amada

Exceptional

"ssh lover come to bed..." Don't tempt me dear Michael, :-) What can I say, I like the music, the rhythm and the music. For sure you have a remarkable great work in here.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015

ahhaha...thank you Beauty Queen. I wrote to the song...but it had a blue grasshopper as the picture....it just didn't fit...so I fixed it...right...? anyway...big love to you girl....Michael

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Exceptional

This is a very solid write. It is highly descriptive in its expression and allows for the sensuousness of the piece to seep through. The top picture is fantastic in it own right. I don't think the bottom attachment is necessary as sometimes less is more. I didn't open it as I didn't want anything to be taken away from my origami impression. Well done on this creative read.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015

ah yes well...it was necessary for me anyway...i wrote this listening to the song...-smile-...is the picture that offensive...? really...? hm...alright let me think about it. love Michael

reply by PoemsOfDD on 14-Nov-2015

Michael, I didn't say it was offensive. I just thought you didn't need two pictures to further express a fine write. The first one is excellent. It's just my opinion. Everybody else may think otherwise.
DD🌸

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015

well the bottom one is a video...the song i wrote the poem too....my other choices are a grasshopper...or an old man holding a shotgun...I just feel more comfortable with this one. I hope thats going to be okay and wont set another villager on fire....will see....love-

reply by PoemsOfDD on 14-Nov-2015

Hmm, you may want to skip the old guy with the shotgun. That could be a bit of mood killer :-)

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

WOW !!!!...Michael...very seductive...and very romantic....
lullaby between two sheets and wind
sink into seductions dream wisp
sssh lover come to bed

what a wonderful dream...
once again your words tell why you are a brilliant poet...
you can feel the heat in the night...
the warmth of lovers in bed...
the wanting for more...
so beautiful your words...
and your picture perfect...beautiful...love ya baby...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015

Hello Pumpkin patch.....-smile- well thank you...i love to hear you say wow. My chest expands and man exudes from every pores resting place. thank you for the wheaties...love you Michael

reply by l.raven on 14-Nov-2015

Hi Baby, I love when chest expands...LOL...I get chills...there multiplying...and I'm losing control...LOL...enjoy the Wheaties...love you too...just me xxoo

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

simmering slinky sultry tune, Michael...
lovely nymphs sitting astride the bed
svelte thighs, lullabies
perfection lies
subtle sighs
moonlit nights
lovely guise
my, oh my...

I love the way this begins and ends on this 'shh lover come to bed'
this song plays in perfection with the movement of these stars
shimmering out of the hands into the universe...
and oh how I wish I was higher
higher
higher

ah, but this is Texas...
and they are such
poots

:(
lol
lovely...
very lovely

sigh me a rivers end into ocean
over and over burning coals
swear my name always home

sire one moment born evermore
breath take mine promise kept
cherished beyond skins keep

(and I hear the repeated sounds of...
yes
yes
yes.. ;)
lol

and then, perfection all over again...

lullaby between two sheets and wind
sink into seductions dream wisp
sssh lover come to bed...

why oh why?
two more weeks sweet cheeks...
well fuck,
that sucks.
lol

lovely
well done

and a virtual galaxy of stars I award you, because virtually,
this is all they gave me, dammit.
:(

*sigh*

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015

ahhaha...It was the shape of the leg that drew me near...I must confess a natural inclination to lean forward until i tip something over, as a result I sumersault well. Thank you Pretty Lady...Truth is I started with the song and had this video and one of a grasshopper...as I said i have a tendency that demands consideration so the see through lace curtains won out...big love Michael

reply by I am Cat on 13-Nov-2015

you sound like me.... mine usually start with the artwork... and go from there. ;)