Comment from mfowler

Excellent

I believe your format as described is working. It is a succinct form that gives the poetry a punchy feel. Here, you've chosen to condense the message of the Cross and Resurrection into a powerful declaration of faith. It is declared as truth and allows for no deviation. Of course, that would be hard in a triquarian. Great faith poem, well written.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

Thank you for the excellent rating and your insights on both the writing and the topic. I appreciate your kind comments.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

It is true if we accept Jesus Christ into our lives and what He did for us we will be assured of redemption. Excellent rhyming and message. Faye

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

Hi Faye,
Thank you for the excellent review. I appreciate the kind comments about the writing. I especially enjoyed your insights on the topic.
Debi

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Debi, I believe He is here for us at all times...my not always seem like it...but just look twice...and believe...I love your beautiful poem...and your beautiful picture...so nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015

Hi Linda,
Thank you for your wonderful insights on the topic. I appreciate your kind words about the writing.
Debi

reply by l.raven on 11-Nov-2015

you are so welcome Debi...xxoo Linda

Comment from Neonewman

Exceptional

The artwork is stellar! This is one of the most masterfully crafted pieces I have seen in quite some time! What a wonderful way to spread the word of our wonderful savior.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

Hi Steve,
Thank you for the awesome six star rating! You brighten my night! I appreciate the kind comments about the poem. Thank you so much. God bless you as well.
Debi

reply by Neonewman on 13-Nov-2015

Absolutely my pleasure!

reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Nov-2015

Absolutely my pleasure!

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi friend
Thisis a beautiful writing, sounds a bit inspired. I like it . It seems to tell me a lot. Faith and strength to accept the right way.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015

Hi Benny Beeharry,
Thank you for the kind comments about the writing. I love your comment about "Faith and strength to accept the right way."
I appreciate you stopping by. Debi

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

A beautiful way to present Christ's promise of
Redemption.
You have used this form well.
Beautiful presentation.
Nancy

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

HI Nancy,
Thank you for the encouraging comments about the presentation and use of the form. I appreciate you dropping by to read and review.
Debi

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)

Nice Triquatrain with solid rhyme and meter. Attractive presentation. Well chosen words about God and to remember that He sacrifice Himself for us, so we may have eternal life. Good job!
Gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

Hi Gypsy,
I appreciate your kind comments about the poem, and your insights on the theme. Thank you for taking the time to stop by to read and review.
Debi

Comment from ericawrites

Excellent

This is a really beautiful, faith-filled poem,
flows well, rhymes beautifully,
with a very strong message.

Well done, thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

Thank you for the encouraging review, Erica. I appreciate your excellent review and stars. Thank you for taking the time to stop by to read and comment.

Comment from GracieAnn

Exceptional

Debbie,
This A Triquatrain poem is new to me and I always enjoy how you contribute to the advancement of us poets. I found the write to be very inspiring and concise. Well done, my friend. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

Hi GracieAnn,
What a nice thing to say. I have spent the year trying out new poetry forms and just shared as I went along. I never considered that I was contributing to anyone's advancement. I am so pleased you liked this one. The shiny six stars have me smiling!
Debi

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Terrific rhyme and meter highlighted this poem for me. I love this:

'I conquered doom. The empty tomb...
a gift to you from me...'

I so enjoy your spiritual poems, Debi. You do them so well!

:) Bev

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015

Hi Bev,

Thank you for your encouraging words. I am so pleased you liked this. I meant for it to be longer, but it just seemed to say all that it wanted to say.

Debi

reply by Writingfundimension on 11-Nov-2015

You're very welcome, Debi. :) Bev