When Blood Collides
Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "Spotlight on Barbara and Bobby"A family's love is tested.
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Comment from snooker155
good only one criticism please replace the word handicapped with the more modern and socially acceptable words special needs then I will review it again and give it the perfect five review it so richly deserves that is why in this present format I can only award you a 4 many thanks William alias snooker155x
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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good only one criticism please replace the word handicapped with the more modern and socially acceptable words special needs then I will review it again and give it the perfect five review it so richly deserves that is why in this present format I can only award you a 4 many thanks William alias snooker155x
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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I can see your objection, although special needs always makes me think of something that affects the mind as well as the body. So I changed it to physically disabled. Does that work for you?
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Comment from Donya Quijote
Hmmm. If memory serves me well, Barbara is fast approaching her diagnosis of cancer. The weight loss and frequent falling are indicators that something is definitely wrong.
You are right. Your daughter and your sister do share many traits in common. Could she be your sister's daughter?
Bobby sounds like he was a wonderful person. I've wanted to tell you that and not if I have or haven't. Anyway, there is it regardless.
Hey, no nits tonight!!!!
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Hmmm. If memory serves me well, Barbara is fast approaching her diagnosis of cancer. The weight loss and frequent falling are indicators that something is definitely wrong.
You are right. Your daughter and your sister do share many traits in common. Could she be your sister's daughter?
Bobby sounds like he was a wonderful person. I've wanted to tell you that and not if I have or haven't. Anyway, there is it regardless.
Hey, no nits tonight!!!!
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Good for you. Your memory is right on. Nichole's my spitting image, no doubt she's my daughter. When I was younger, people thought we were sisters. Then again, Barb and I didn't look, think, or act alike. It's all in the alignment of planets the time you were born. LOL
