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Potters Wheel

Life

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Comment from honeytree
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Life is so important and can be different
for all of us within our lives.
We all share the sickness when it comes upon us all.
We share our sorrows within our life we can become scared
within our lives, we are human but we are loved by God.

Annie

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2015

Comment from snooker155
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Remarkable you have a real talent for writing poetry it seems to come so naturally to you just like the skill of the potter at the potters wheel moulding out each new masterpiece in clay. Thanks for sharing your work with me and enjoy your retirement and keep up the fantastic work. Love from William x SNOOKER 155

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2015

Comment from Sambangi
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This is an excellent poem, great imagination. Especially I liked "wisdom flows to each pour, bottle empties". While I can not read poet's mind, it gives me great philosophical meaning. Wisdom is poured into the brain as we lose something, we learn from failures. Very well done

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2015