The Wonder
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Out of Mouths of Babes"miscellaneous poems
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
I love your beautiful poem. Well chosen words and a very attractive presentation with some awesome pictures. My favorite line is =poetic Jesus Christ lives freed verse
Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hello :)
I love your beautiful poem. Well chosen words and a very attractive presentation with some awesome pictures. My favorite line is =poetic Jesus Christ lives freed verse
Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hey Gypsy...-smile- haven't seen you around the caravan lately...whatch a been up too...? Horse trading or spinning kicks with Stevie nicks....haha...good to see you girl. love michael
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Thank you Michael, I've been around, you just haven't noticed. lol (((gypsy hugs))))
Comment from AnnaLinda
Reconciled,
You have written a gentle, spiritual and special poem.
I like how you repeated your beautiful entry again in
the end. Lovely thoughts to ponder here.
"every seconds tick" did you mean 'every second's tick'
It was a pleasure reading this and also listening to
your well chosen accompanying music.
Linda
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Reconciled,
You have written a gentle, spiritual and special poem.
I like how you repeated your beautiful entry again in
the end. Lovely thoughts to ponder here.
"every seconds tick" did you mean 'every second's tick'
It was a pleasure reading this and also listening to
your well chosen accompanying music.
Linda
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hi Linda...-smile- I guess thats what I meant...not real good with that comma stuff...thanks i'll fix it...-smile- Happy you enjoyed....love Michael
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Michael,
You are welcome...it was lovely.
(my computer is not showing the
photos with the video...it is on my
side, but the music was very soothing.)
A delight to review.
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its a lil' angel girl...dropping stars from the sky...-wink-
Comment from amada
I have seen and heard this little girl. I don't remember the show. For sure she has grace and the voice of angels. You wrote such great lines, my favorite one "destiny touched today every tomorrow known..." Hugs.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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I have seen and heard this little girl. I don't remember the show. For sure she has grace and the voice of angels. You wrote such great lines, my favorite one "destiny touched today every tomorrow known..." Hugs.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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hey Happy Feet...-smile-...yes she's amazing...growing up now though...beautiful young woman.....I think she was on one them star search deals...that keep passing me by...-headshake-...just cant catch a break happy. -shouldershrug-...oh well, guess you guys are stuck with me. Love and hugs. michael
Comment from snooker155
Excellent thank you. Everything about this poem is just perfect from the sparkles of fairy dust on the picture to the live songs. It was really good. You are so clever and talented and obviously know your way around a computer. Can you teach me?
many blessings, snooker155
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Excellent thank you. Everything about this poem is just perfect from the sparkles of fairy dust on the picture to the live songs. It was really good. You are so clever and talented and obviously know your way around a computer. Can you teach me?
many blessings, snooker155
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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haha...-smile-....i'm sorry for laughing....its just that i learned to operate a computer here...but of course i'll teach all i know...will at least get it turned on for ya...haha...sure I'll help you in any way I can....what are you having trouble with...? thanks for the great review....love Michael
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I can turn it on and do emails and look things up and buy online. that's about it. otherwise ime still stuck in the 1980s. great that we can share a laugh together. tax
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well if you any questions just let me know...-wink-
Comment from I am Cat
Hello sweet 'boy'... ;)
I hope you are well today...
this is a lovely poem
touting a lovely child and her wonderfulness... thing of beauty, and a joy forever.
You have some amazing lines in here (as usual) and I'd like to tell you my favorites...
'silent comes one night
sudden births delight
and darkness is shadowed forever '
(so lovely in the way you shadow darkness forever... i love that imagery)
'like a crown of sonnets come to life
she moves soul like shakespeare
spell binds natural sounds like brand new
(that's just gorgeous in its interpretation)
'human prayers exist answered in voices of baby's breath '
(ah yes... and puppies!)
I thought this a lovely and so full of love, devotion... i enjoyed it a lot. ;)
I found a couple of SPAG, and they are below. They, in no way, detracted from the beauty of your message. ;)
hugs and love,
Cat
destiney (destiny)
deep se(e) (sea)
mwah!
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hello sweet 'boy'... ;)
I hope you are well today...
this is a lovely poem
touting a lovely child and her wonderfulness... thing of beauty, and a joy forever.
You have some amazing lines in here (as usual) and I'd like to tell you my favorites...
'silent comes one night
sudden births delight
and darkness is shadowed forever '
(so lovely in the way you shadow darkness forever... i love that imagery)
'like a crown of sonnets come to life
she moves soul like shakespeare
spell binds natural sounds like brand new
(that's just gorgeous in its interpretation)
'human prayers exist answered in voices of baby's breath '
(ah yes... and puppies!)
I thought this a lovely and so full of love, devotion... i enjoyed it a lot. ;)
I found a couple of SPAG, and they are below. They, in no way, detracted from the beauty of your message. ;)
hugs and love,
Cat
destiney (destiny)
deep se(e) (sea)
mwah!
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hello Calico...-smile-...ah i dont what happened really...i was listening to Rihanna....and -headshake-...like I said , i'm not sure what happened...heard that kid and changed my tune I guess...-smile-...thank you Dear...I fixed destiny when I bowed before Christ...-wink-...I want "see" as in us no longer blind. big love to you- michael
Comment from frogbook
Beautiful and inventive wording. Lovely sentiment flowing throughout. The angel picture was perfect with her little stars flowing down. For some reason, I can't hear Jackie's beautiful singing on my computer but I know it well.
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Beautiful and inventive wording. Lovely sentiment flowing throughout. The angel picture was perfect with her little stars flowing down. For some reason, I can't hear Jackie's beautiful singing on my computer but I know it well.
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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thank you very much...very happy you enjoyed it. love Michael
