The Wonder
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Smaller Heavens Pleasure"miscellaneous poems
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Comment from johnwilson
This is deserving of a sixth star which I no longer have; however, I'm not sure if this piece made me feel such strong emotions because of the incredible music of Van Morrison and the incredible graphics. However, after reading it after all the glitz and sensuous refrains ended, your poem is rift with sensuous metaphors and analogies and the poem flows so beautifully without punctuation-each word is needed for the climax ending of the poem! Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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This is deserving of a sixth star which I no longer have; however, I'm not sure if this piece made me feel such strong emotions because of the incredible music of Van Morrison and the incredible graphics. However, after reading it after all the glitz and sensuous refrains ended, your poem is rift with sensuous metaphors and analogies and the poem flows so beautifully without punctuation-each word is needed for the climax ending of the poem! Well done!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Hey John...-smile-
yea...I worked on this one. Really appreciate you recognizing that...love to you michael
Comment from VictoriaJoyce
Very eloquently written. Flowed well and was easy to read and follow the 'theme'. Photos were also breath taking. This is the first time I have had the pleasure of reviewing your work.
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Very eloquently written. Flowed well and was easy to read and follow the 'theme'. Photos were also breath taking. This is the first time I have had the pleasure of reviewing your work.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
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no you reviewed "you Reign"....appreciate you enjoying this time too. love to you Michael
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Your poem is beautiful and the accompanying video is great as well. The poem is delicate and disciplined as a ballerina likely is. The juxtaposition of Van Morrison's raspy voice with the delicate dancer is interesting and it works.
I would recommend your poem to anyone. The beautiful is divine. That is what we need more of in this world now.
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Your poem is beautiful and the accompanying video is great as well. The poem is delicate and disciplined as a ballerina likely is. The juxtaposition of Van Morrison's raspy voice with the delicate dancer is interesting and it works.
I would recommend your poem to anyone. The beautiful is divine. That is what we need more of in this world now.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
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Hi Nance...-smile-
ah thank you....I've always loved the graceful movement of the Ballerina...in every women....-smile- thank you for enjoying. love to you ...michael
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. The dance of a ballerina is always beautiful to watch and enjoyable. The gracious movements are mind blowing.
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A very well-written poem. The dance of a ballerina is always beautiful to watch and enjoyable. The gracious movements are mind blowing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
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H Sandra...-smile-
thank you sweet....appreciate you enjoying. love to you Michael
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is the most beautiful poem I have had the pleasure to read this morning. Your well-penned verses produce such lovely imagery throughout the poem. Really LOVE the fourth and fifth verses very much. The video is an awesome accompaniment to the poem. Very impressive writing at its finest! God bless and hugs, Susanne
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This is the most beautiful poem I have had the pleasure to read this morning. Your well-penned verses produce such lovely imagery throughout the poem. Really LOVE the fourth and fifth verses very much. The video is an awesome accompaniment to the poem. Very impressive writing at its finest! God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
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ha...hey sue...-smile-
well thank you....you've encouraged and enlarged my ego...and I am appreciative. love to you Michael
Comment from fimarie78
A beautiful portrayal of a ballerina. I liked the way your poem was interspersed with ballet steps.
There was alliteration throughout, carefully woven into the structure.
This flows well with careful, interesting vocabulary choices.
Best wishes
Fiona
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A beautiful portrayal of a ballerina. I liked the way your poem was interspersed with ballet steps.
There was alliteration throughout, carefully woven into the structure.
This flows well with careful, interesting vocabulary choices.
Best wishes
Fiona
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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why thank yopu...very pleased you enjoyed. love to you...Michael
Comment from RoostyNester
Very nice poem! You brought the grace and elegance of beauty in your poem about a ballerina. Style and words created a flow in your message to the reader. You could feel the admiration in your poetic style.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Very nice poem! You brought the grace and elegance of beauty in your poem about a ballerina. Style and words created a flow in your message to the reader. You could feel the admiration in your poetic style.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Hi...-smile-
I thank you for enjoying. glad you did...love to you...Michael
Comment from djsaxon
"Step right up and ring the bell". OMG. Astral Weeks (1968). A gorgeous write that resonates in my heart like a caress. Richly rewarding allit throughout the write. You always seem to find the most amazing music to accompany the pen. DJ xx
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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"Step right up and ring the bell". OMG. Astral Weeks (1968). A gorgeous write that resonates in my heart like a caress. Richly rewarding allit throughout the write. You always seem to find the most amazing music to accompany the pen. DJ xx
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Hey DJ....-smile-
thank you Sir. ah yea...Van's the man. going through my portfolio...petting all my neglected children. appreciate ya man. love Michael
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A beautifully composed poem with all of the ballet references. Never having taken ballet, I am at a loss for what most of them mean, but your meaning comes through anyway. One suggestion:
abandon sips sparingly nectars treasure (nectar's)
Good writing, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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A beautifully composed poem with all of the ballet references. Never having taken ballet, I am at a loss for what most of them mean, but your meaning comes through anyway. One suggestion:
abandon sips sparingly nectars treasure (nectar's)
Good writing, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Hey Deb...-smile-
thank you...I'll go fix it. appreciate the dance....love to you ...michael
Comment from Gianinas
"kissing the joy of each and every envy...
graceful serves you... "
Beautifully expressed, this is the celebration of woman, that each of us wants to have or be part of.
Gianina
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"kissing the joy of each and every envy...
graceful serves you... "
Beautifully expressed, this is the celebration of woman, that each of us wants to have or be part of.
Gianina
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Amen....Hi...-smile-
the female form is Master-craft. Simply marvelous to admire. Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed. love to you...michael
