The Wonder
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Comment from Eric1
Hi Micheal, this is a beautiful and melodious free verse poem, a stunning piece of free verse poetry that causes its reader to stop time and again just to savour the line he has just read, Brilliant my friend.
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hi Micheal, this is a beautiful and melodious free verse poem, a stunning piece of free verse poetry that causes its reader to stop time and again just to savour the line he has just read, Brilliant my friend.
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hey Bro...-smile- Well thanks...this one came real fast, I'm mean faster than usual....I didn't even stop in a phone booth first...ahh I dont know if theres anything to look at there ...or not...do you...ah haaha....I dont know sometimes I feel like a nut...sometimes I dont...its a Peter-Paul thing. haha thanks Eric...hope you're well Bro ....love Michael
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You are welcome my friend and yes I am good.
Comment from Gloria ....
Michael, this is the most beautiful thing I have ever in my life seen. I am confused in what to do. To enjoy pure beauty and not share that beauty with others seems selfish. But to share beauty that others may trample on seems cruel.
I have looked at this for a full hour and know I will look at it for hours to come, I am still unsure how to wander through this Garden of Eden.
I apologize for not being able to offer more but I am completely awed.
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Michael, this is the most beautiful thing I have ever in my life seen. I am confused in what to do. To enjoy pure beauty and not share that beauty with others seems selfish. But to share beauty that others may trample on seems cruel.
I have looked at this for a full hour and know I will look at it for hours to come, I am still unsure how to wander through this Garden of Eden.
I apologize for not being able to offer more but I am completely awed.
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Good morning Glory....you have certainly made mine...-smile- to possess a Poetess essence is to kiss a frog a prince......thank you so much for what you did....this once...-smile- and forever remebered. Big love Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
Very nice work here as first flowers find rekonciled here style mimics mind shift I got you buddy many years in age I don't know how many years have been doing this I'm only been doing it for about a dozen I feel like on minecraft sharpening every blade in my belt I'm able to Call and hawk away at the crudeness of reviewers poignant parade you do not understand writers such as you and me who cannot even reach out for our hands are much higher than they could ever see for they are the other they are the lower while we are hiring may not be seen but we sure ain't the end we are movers we are creators we are earthquake in vacuum tornadoes of doom forecasting disorders balloon absorbing penetrating the liquefied crust of well quickly and safely as our minds flow so I'll be enjoyed that it's coming through My on Android ZTE phone for I have no way to communicate I have no writing of tablet of pad or top no computer on the Mount nor fire of Kindle but the wood that burns inside me will always ablaze collected engaged English so the grammar here might not be quite adequate or eccentric or eclectic but believe me words mean nothing if the soul that's expected so continue to write with your mind heart and soul because between you and me I feel the build the whole Ricky 10:24
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Very nice work here as first flowers find rekonciled here style mimics mind shift I got you buddy many years in age I don't know how many years have been doing this I'm only been doing it for about a dozen I feel like on minecraft sharpening every blade in my belt I'm able to Call and hawk away at the crudeness of reviewers poignant parade you do not understand writers such as you and me who cannot even reach out for our hands are much higher than they could ever see for they are the other they are the lower while we are hiring may not be seen but we sure ain't the end we are movers we are creators we are earthquake in vacuum tornadoes of doom forecasting disorders balloon absorbing penetrating the liquefied crust of well quickly and safely as our minds flow so I'll be enjoyed that it's coming through My on Android ZTE phone for I have no way to communicate I have no writing of tablet of pad or top no computer on the Mount nor fire of Kindle but the wood that burns inside me will always ablaze collected engaged English so the grammar here might not be quite adequate or eccentric or eclectic but believe me words mean nothing if the soul that's expected so continue to write with your mind heart and soul because between you and me I feel the build the whole Ricky 10:24
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hey thanks man...-smile- appreciate you enjoying....love michael
