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Comment from Manic Mike
I've no idea what I just read but it's awesome...I really enjoy words woven together in an abstract or surreal manner and this well crafted in such a way I think.
I really like your use of alliteration as well. can I ask you what some of your inspirations are or what writers you like?
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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I've no idea what I just read but it's awesome...I really enjoy words woven together in an abstract or surreal manner and this well crafted in such a way I think.
I really like your use of alliteration as well. can I ask you what some of your inspirations are or what writers you like?
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Ah its just a mans wander through experience.
Thank you man...appreciate your good taste...-wink-...
inspiration...hm....honor...truth....love.
I have evolved here...I now find a song....that takes me ...somewhere....and I go....and write what I remember.
writers...hm....here....many....all sometimes. For consistent excellence....Missmerri....she is count on Gold. ah ....RG Star....of course. Leinko...is always right on time. ah Gloria...but she really dont like me...she just pretends...-wink-...her sidekick Mav....turns my wheels sometimes. ah everyone here who loves words and uses them to give life to nothing before...inspire me. Maureen Napier...Gungalo.....Pili....Tammy, many arent here anymore.
outside of here...I like Sara teasdale....and rod Mcqueen....and the Psalms...-wink-...love to you man....Michael
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wo wo!! slow down haha
You're awesomeness is a little overwhelming haha
I mean, what about famous or semi famous writers? Hunter S. Thompson hits on the nose for me...I also love the beats, Jack Kerouack, Allen Ginsberg, and my favorite maniac of all time, William Buroughs...Just to name a few...How about you? Who really pushes your soul into unexpected directions?
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hm......well to be honest a bunch of Baptist satanist pushed my soul around a lil' bit....but I'm stronger then them....I'm real. -smile-........I'm afraid I'm not up on all them folk you mentioned.....I havent read much of "famous" poets. what pushes my soul....the way you mean.....is ah anything and everything honest to God real. love-
Comment from create4christ
I LOVE LOVE LOVE your GIF illustration!! The peace I feel from the moving water! Your poem is also beautiful. It brought back memories of times on an old tire swing hung from our giant oak tree .
Thank you for sharing, my friend. ..Penny
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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I LOVE LOVE LOVE your GIF illustration!! The peace I feel from the moving water! Your poem is also beautiful. It brought back memories of times on an old tire swing hung from our giant oak tree .
Thank you for sharing, my friend. ..Penny
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Hi...-smile-....ha...yea me too...excatly...the old used tire swing. Well thank you Penny for enjoying. love to you...michael
Comment from michaelcahill
This perfectly depicts exactly what I believe and hope I've lived. Whatever happens at least we can be what we are and not compromise that. I've never felt old even now. Something about integrity I guess. Well, there's a lot more here than that, but I keyed in on it. :))
One of your very best. Wowser so to speak. Love, mikey
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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This perfectly depicts exactly what I believe and hope I've lived. Whatever happens at least we can be what we are and not compromise that. I've never felt old even now. Something about integrity I guess. Well, there's a lot more here than that, but I keyed in on it. :))
One of your very best. Wowser so to speak. Love, mikey
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Hey Mike...-smile-
I really was ...ah "planning" on heading somewhere else. Something pretty for her. but ...Do you know...I brought her ah back to God. She wanted to marry and I insisted ....she prayed to a shrine of some kind a statue she called Budda....but it was a women. -headtilt-....anyway, my intentions for her from beginning to now...where always honorable....and I rejoice in that knowing....no somethings never age. Appreciate you. love Michael
Comment from Eric1
Hya Micheal. well what to make of your latest wonderful free verse poem, it comes across as a ramble through a boy's history, the growing, coming of age etc, either way I loved the refreshing outlook of your words my dear friend.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Hya Micheal. well what to make of your latest wonderful free verse poem, it comes across as a ramble through a boy's history, the growing, coming of age etc, either way I loved the refreshing outlook of your words my dear friend.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Hey Eric...-smile-....yes thats it...thank you Sir...appreviate the stop by. love to you...Michael
Comment from Lisa Deverick
I usually 'get' your poems... I guess I need to read your words again, because I am not pulling it all together this time. It leaves me confused...
(great picture) lol
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016
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I usually 'get' your poems... I guess I need to read your words again, because I am not pulling it all together this time. It leaves me confused...
(great picture) lol
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016
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its just a mans wander over yesterdays precious hours up and until this ones sunset. -smile-...thank you...Lisa. love to you...Michael
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I will read it again when I am more awake...
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yes please...but its too late to kiss me six now...-smile-...night night-
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LOL- happy dreams friend
Comment from poetsteve15
A very will written poem. I love picture you chose to go with it, It helped to seal the deal with me. I am kind of surprise that you are not rated higher. Of your works that I have seen I think you should be in the top ten at least.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016
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A very will written poem. I love picture you chose to go with it, It helped to seal the deal with me. I am kind of surprise that you are not rated higher. Of your works that I have seen I think you should be in the top ten at least.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016
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Hey Steve...-smile-
yea me too...i like the whole presentation.
yea...? me too...about two years ago. I learned to make it work for me...-wink-...yea well...more like the top five but appreciate you're noticing. love to you...Michael
Comment from frogbook
Nice to see one of your beautifully worded works. Reads like a dream, so nostalgic and thoughtful with lovely phrasing throughout.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Nice to see one of your beautifully worded works. Reads like a dream, so nostalgic and thoughtful with lovely phrasing throughout.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Hi...-smile-....well thank you. Appreciate you enjoying. love to you....michael
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Oh, I truly wish I had a six-star rating left to offer this wonderfully spiritual and uplifting piece of poetry. It is simply beautiful. Your well-written words warmed this weary heart and opened my eyes to a new world. Great job. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016
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Oh, I truly wish I had a six-star rating left to offer this wonderfully spiritual and uplifting piece of poetry. It is simply beautiful. Your well-written words warmed this weary heart and opened my eyes to a new world. Great job. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016
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wow...-smile-
ya know I thought so too...but it sure way better coming from you. Thank you Sue....love to you...Michael
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You are very welcome, Michael! God bless and hugs, Susanne
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You are very welcome, Michael! God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment from royowen
I love that scripture tell us that one must come to God not as a knowledgeable man or woman, but as a child, and I do believe that our childhood innocence still exists within us, my choice is I'd rather look upon a world of hope, well done, Michael, another triumph, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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I love that scripture tell us that one must come to God not as a knowledgeable man or woman, but as a child, and I do believe that our childhood innocence still exists within us, my choice is I'd rather look upon a world of hope, well done, Michael, another triumph, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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Hi Roy...-smile-
yes Sir...I agree. I'd rather look upon a world of hope too.
but...He has already told us....this one ends. love to you Sir. Michael
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I must agree, everything you say is true, I really meant for the individual.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. Very deep thoughts and not everybody's taste. You did a great job writing this with great imaginary.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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A very well-written poem. Very deep thoughts and not everybody's taste. You did a great job writing this with great imaginary.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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Hi Sandra...-smile-...thank you Maam...happy you enjoyed. love to you...Michael
