I had a Dream
Can a dream be resurrected from the ashes of life?6 total reviews
Comment from jpduck
This is a profoundly sad and moving piece. Of course, it is sad because the loss of a loved and loving partner is always profoundly distressing.
But I know for certain that our personal dreams can be resurrected. I believe that one of the concepts that holds back this resurrection is the belief that one is defined by a partnership. Each member of a partnership has his/her own definition. This may be changed and informed to a degree by the realtionship, but the definitions remain personal and individual. Acknowledging this is what can 'can bring beauty out of the ashes of lost dreams'.
Adrian
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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This is a profoundly sad and moving piece. Of course, it is sad because the loss of a loved and loving partner is always profoundly distressing.
But I know for certain that our personal dreams can be resurrected. I believe that one of the concepts that holds back this resurrection is the belief that one is defined by a partnership. Each member of a partnership has his/her own definition. This may be changed and informed to a degree by the realtionship, but the definitions remain personal and individual. Acknowledging this is what can 'can bring beauty out of the ashes of lost dreams'.
Adrian
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the wonderful review and all the starts. - Judy
Comment from AnnaLinda
Judy,
Your essay is so very honest and transparent. Your ability to convey your
love, grief, change and ultimate hope was done with excellence. I'm sure
your writing gift does minister to many people.
My new husband was also married for 42 years. His wife had passed
away from cancer and I came into his life. One never knows what the
future may hold. I really like your palm tree dreams...I'm right there
with you on that. It just so happens my Dutch man moved to Florida
with me.
Anyway, your piece is outstanding,
Linda
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Judy,
Your essay is so very honest and transparent. Your ability to convey your
love, grief, change and ultimate hope was done with excellence. I'm sure
your writing gift does minister to many people.
My new husband was also married for 42 years. His wife had passed
away from cancer and I came into his life. One never knows what the
future may hold. I really like your palm tree dreams...I'm right there
with you on that. It just so happens my Dutch man moved to Florida
with me.
Anyway, your piece is outstanding,
Linda
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Oh, thank you so much for this wonderful review. I appreciate the additional note about your new husband. You have blessed me today. -Judy
Comment from Jay Squires
Hi, Judith Ann. I believe this is the first chance I had to read your work. I am impressed by your communication skills.
With your solid foundation of faith and your decision to help other widows through your blog, I think you've found your way to "bring beauty out of the ashes of lost dreams."
Good luck with your writing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Hi, Judith Ann. I believe this is the first chance I had to read your work. I am impressed by your communication skills.
With your solid foundation of faith and your decision to help other widows through your blog, I think you've found your way to "bring beauty out of the ashes of lost dreams."
Good luck with your writing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Thank you, Jay Squires. What a wonderful review. I was on FanStory a number of years ago, then my husband died and I was floundering for awhile. I am back at it now and it feels wonderful to be writing again. Thanks again. --Judy
Comment from Tessa Kay
Actually, I wouldn't mind either, but I think I would lean more towards the palm tree and beaches. I hope you get to fullfill your dream even as a single person. There's no reason why not. Just go for it and enjoy it. :)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Actually, I wouldn't mind either, but I think I would lean more towards the palm tree and beaches. I hope you get to fullfill your dream even as a single person. There's no reason why not. Just go for it and enjoy it. :)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Thank you, Tessa Kay, for the wonderful review and the grand advice. --Judy
Comment from Nosha17
I became a widow after I had divorced my husband, and found my poetry so there is definitely hope for people to start again. I am so busy in my retirement with editing, writing, travelling, no time to be lonely or bored. Well written piece of prose, good to encourage those in similar circumstances. Faye
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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I became a widow after I had divorced my husband, and found my poetry so there is definitely hope for people to start again. I am so busy in my retirement with editing, writing, travelling, no time to be lonely or bored. Well written piece of prose, good to encourage those in similar circumstances. Faye
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Thank you
Comment from Beejay
It brought tears to my eyes, tender, charming, captivating....an honest exploration of your heart.if you have dreams..even now, you must realise them, experience them, enjoy them. I'm more than sure your husband would want you to.You have written a lovely, lovely, piece of work.I ' m so pleased I read it, you are an inspiration.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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It brought tears to my eyes, tender, charming, captivating....an honest exploration of your heart.if you have dreams..even now, you must realise them, experience them, enjoy them. I'm more than sure your husband would want you to.You have written a lovely, lovely, piece of work.I ' m so pleased I read it, you are an inspiration.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Thank you for your words of encouragement. I am motivated to do more now. -- Judy
