Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "This Is Where You Walk Away"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
26 total reviews
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
I guess I'm not academic enough to look for rhyme, for its the deep feelings and colours of you loves, losses, and learnings which speak to me, and I feel enhance our human and Knowledge Tree, therefore adding wisdom in our choices, and growth. Thank you for sharing, Brett. Blessings, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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I guess I'm not academic enough to look for rhyme, for its the deep feelings and colours of you loves, losses, and learnings which speak to me, and I feel enhance our human and Knowledge Tree, therefore adding wisdom in our choices, and growth. Thank you for sharing, Brett. Blessings, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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I am glad you are not academic enough to look for rhyme. In my song lyrics I strive to break every conventional wisdom known to mankind about such things. Glad you enjoyed this. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Blessings Brett! Actually totally unedited on conventional wisdom, although sadly oft automated by its conditioning, I can just look up to, and enjoy much variety of rhythm and rhyme as found on FanStory. Blessings, Maureen*&*
Comment from sweetthanesue
this flows realy well and love the freestyle..nice lyrics and like the truthful directness of one summing up a very common scenario...well expressed
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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this flows realy well and love the freestyle..nice lyrics and like the truthful directness of one summing up a very common scenario...well expressed
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from robyn corum
1.) You left me with my fire burning, where I (never once have) been
--> just a suggestion, for sake of meter - though you may have song notes in your mind instead! hahaha
I really liked these lyrics. They say something powerful and something I think most people can relate to. Good job!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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1.) You left me with my fire burning, where I (never once have) been
--> just a suggestion, for sake of meter - though you may have song notes in your mind instead! hahaha
I really liked these lyrics. They say something powerful and something I think most people can relate to. Good job!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Not worried about meter in my lyrics. Music rounds them out very nicely. Glad you enjoyed them. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Tessa Kay
A poem full of regrets for the consequences of his actions. Trust is something that is hard to earn but so easy to shatter. Looks like he's lost hers for good.
Lovely lyrics. :)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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A poem full of regrets for the consequences of his actions. Trust is something that is hard to earn but so easy to shatter. Looks like he's lost hers for good.
Lovely lyrics. :)
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Muffins
Your lyrics pour out the difficulties of love like thick molasses. The only gene in music tough enough to express it is country music. This song is the perfect example of how a moment can change the direction of ones life.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Your lyrics pour out the difficulties of love like thick molasses. The only gene in music tough enough to express it is country music. This song is the perfect example of how a moment can change the direction of ones life.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Country music is the very best! That is so true. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from petalangela
As always your words touch the heart and examine the emotions of love and heartbreak.
Country music at it's finest.
I find your harsh reviewing hard to relate to the gentle work you produce
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2015
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As always your words touch the heart and examine the emotions of love and heartbreak.
Country music at it's finest.
I find your harsh reviewing hard to relate to the gentle work you produce
Comment Written 15-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Comment from doggymad
I found this poem extremely moving. Despite being in the wrong I feel the pain that this man is enduring. I almost feel sorry for them.
Love the last verse as he accepts that she should/will walk away
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Freda
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2015
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I found this poem extremely moving. Despite being in the wrong I feel the pain that this man is enduring. I almost feel sorry for them.
Love the last verse as he accepts that she should/will walk away
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Freda
Comment Written 14-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from MelB
Another great poem about lost love. More often than not, cheating will make her walk away. I could feel the regret in his words and how he realized how much she meant to him.
Love is like a candle we can warm up in its glow - favorite line
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2015
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Another great poem about lost love. More often than not, cheating will make her walk away. I could feel the regret in his words and how he realized how much she meant to him.
Love is like a candle we can warm up in its glow - favorite line
Comment Written 14-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Linda Engel
This defiantly has that country music flavor to it. I wrote a poem "Scorned" the flip side of this. Men don't realized the danger they put themselves into when tempted my a new set of legs.
I really like the comparison of the woman to an angry storm coming,
She will stir up all that was once comfortable to him.
good lyrics.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2015
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This defiantly has that country music flavor to it. I wrote a poem "Scorned" the flip side of this. Men don't realized the danger they put themselves into when tempted my a new set of legs.
I really like the comparison of the woman to an angry storm coming,
She will stir up all that was once comfortable to him.
good lyrics.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
If you burn your fingers with some one else and be caught. Know there will be consequences you will not like. At the end you might end up all alone.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015
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If you burn your fingers with some one else and be caught. Know there will be consequences you will not like. At the end you might end up all alone.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
