Dreams and aspirations.
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Comment from Eternal Muse
Your poems are always soothing to the meeting and and thought-pondering. This one is no exception. Great rhyme, meter and cadence.
o when we find our purpose,
and know what price to pay.
Remember through life's problems,
that God will find a way.
Very spiritually soothing.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Your poems are always soothing to the meeting and and thought-pondering. This one is no exception. Great rhyme, meter and cadence.
o when we find our purpose,
and know what price to pay.
Remember through life's problems,
that God will find a way.
Very spiritually soothing.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.
Comment from GentleWind
Thank you for this piece today. I surely needed to hear this message again, as I sit at the computer with darkness and rain outside my window. I am so glad you are bold enough to put the Truth on. May we all be so bold.
I truly enjoyed the rhyme and the message. Great job
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thank you for this piece today. I surely needed to hear this message again, as I sit at the computer with darkness and rain outside my window. I am so glad you are bold enough to put the Truth on. May we all be so bold.
I truly enjoyed the rhyme and the message. Great job
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, and glad you received something, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dawn Munro
I think you have made a very important point wit this masterful poem, Roy, and with your author's notes as well. We might spend time trying to understand what our purpose is sometimes because we are, after all, simply human, but in surrendering all to Him there always seems to be something we can do to serve, and like our faith, it's ongoing; something we refresh every day!
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I think you have made a very important point wit this masterful poem, Roy, and with your author's notes as well. We might spend time trying to understand what our purpose is sometimes because we are, after all, simply human, but in surrendering all to Him there always seems to be something we can do to serve, and like our faith, it's ongoing; something we refresh every day!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks Dawn, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.
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Always a pleasure!
Comment from Aussie
We whose eyes are opened can see the human race destroying itself and one day there will be no food. Foolish people, full of greed and avarice, turn again to Him who first loved us. Well done Roy.
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We whose eyes are opened can see the human race destroying itself and one day there will be no food. Foolish people, full of greed and avarice, turn again to Him who first loved us. Well done Roy.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks Kay, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Zue65
I love the positive message of the poem supplemented by the Bible verses in your author's notes. I believe God gave us dreams and visions so we can continue to imagine and feel His presence and develop a personal relationship with Him even though we don't actually see him. An excellent piece.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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I love the positive message of the poem supplemented by the Bible verses in your author's notes. I believe God gave us dreams and visions so we can continue to imagine and feel His presence and develop a personal relationship with Him even though we don't actually see him. An excellent piece.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Serendipity!
I'm glad I discovered your writing on FanStory. Even before 'opening it' I have the confidence it will be worthwhile. I appreciate your clear, honest witness, and please keep it up.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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I'm glad I discovered your writing on FanStory. Even before 'opening it' I have the confidence it will be worthwhile. I appreciate your clear, honest witness, and please keep it up.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Roy: I asked God why I was here in Jackson for 12 years....Friday, August 13. Then, Annie was beaten up in a cornfield by bullies - "let it rain." Then, my mom got sick. God sent me on two missions to help my precious family. I felt His presence and voice and left. Mom is feeling better and walking with a walker in a nursering home. She is eating again and looking for card players to play go fish. Annie is cheering on Saturday for a cheer comp. The bullies are busted with a connection of friends, teachers, and attorneys. Praise the LORD! Note, Annie's poem, "My cute Huskie, Lola." God bless you! Got to fly! flylikeaneagle (going on bus at 5am for a 3 hour trip. It's an all day event and 3 hours home.)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Roy: I asked God why I was here in Jackson for 12 years....Friday, August 13. Then, Annie was beaten up in a cornfield by bullies - "let it rain." Then, my mom got sick. God sent me on two missions to help my precious family. I felt His presence and voice and left. Mom is feeling better and walking with a walker in a nursering home. She is eating again and looking for card players to play go fish. Annie is cheering on Saturday for a cheer comp. The bullies are busted with a connection of friends, teachers, and attorneys. Praise the LORD! Note, Annie's poem, "My cute Huskie, Lola." God bless you! Got to fly! flylikeaneagle (going on bus at 5am for a 3 hour trip. It's an all day event and 3 hours home.)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Well done my wonderful God serving friend, thanks for sharing, may The Lord heal your mum speedily, and Annie be encouraged,and the Spirit be with you on your journey. Bless you Nancy, Roy.
Comment from RGstar
Once again, strength in faith, never waning. Dreams are a part of the psyche which connects often, though not thought of, with daily lives...this connection makes them imperative for the se arc of the unreachable. It keeps us hoping.
One little thing, Roy. I think ''door way'' should be one word...'doorway'
Another good delivery, Roy. Keep the faith. Best wishes to the family.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Once again, strength in faith, never waning. Dreams are a part of the psyche which connects often, though not thought of, with daily lives...this connection makes them imperative for the se arc of the unreachable. It keeps us hoping.
One little thing, Roy. I think ''door way'' should be one word...'doorway'
Another good delivery, Roy. Keep the faith. Best wishes to the family.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Thanks RG, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, changed "doorway" thanks, blessings, Roy.
Comment from LIJ Red
A long look at the Big Bang will make you think of a supreme maker snapping his fingers and saying let there be light...after all a thousand years are as a watch in the night to Him. There you go 8/6/8/6ing again. Excellent post.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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A long look at the Big Bang will make you think of a supreme maker snapping his fingers and saying let there be light...after all a thousand years are as a watch in the night to Him. There you go 8/6/8/6ing again. Excellent post.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Thanks Red, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork to go with your poem.
-Your poem is well written with good rhyme, images, and message.
-There is also good progression of ideas.
-A few things I particularly like are:
* "With all my gifts and leanings,
where does my purpose sit?
* Don't tremble at the door way
and say, "I'll wait a year."
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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-Nice artwork to go with your poem.
-Your poem is well written with good rhyme, images, and message.
-There is also good progression of ideas.
-A few things I particularly like are:
* "With all my gifts and leanings,
where does my purpose sit?
* Don't tremble at the door way
and say, "I'll wait a year."
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Thanks, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.
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You are very welcome.
