Comment from Writeronboard

Excellent

I love this poem! Every stanza has strong and has meaning. If we look to God when in doubt, He will make a way every time. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015

Thanks, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.

Comment from OLA THOMAS

Excellent

This is well done poem. Very motivating and inspiring. No giving up on visions and aspirations, no procrastination about visions as you clearly stated:
"Don't tremble at the door way
and say, "I'll wait a year." A spirit moving poem.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015

Thanks Ola, q for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.

Comment from jclark

Excellent

What a beautiful, heartwarming reminder for each of us that we do all have a purpose. We are all on this earth together and sharing the same journey regardless of our life status. You speak very well to that with your lovely poem. Your words are so uplifting and encouraging. Your picture choice couldn't have been more perfect. I would have given you six stars but am currently out of them. Kindly, Judy

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks Judy for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Often we can't see our path so if we are lucky enough to know it, we need to go for it. With God's help we'll find it.
Teresa

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks Teresa, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Facing the future can seem overwhelming to most people as this well written poem so clearly depicts. However, the future can be overcome also.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks Brett, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Well written in ABAB rhyming format. God does find a way doesn't he? I'm so thankful to finally know my purpose in life. I struggled for many years trying to figure it out. Some people unfortunately, never figure it out.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks Melissa, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.

reply by MelB on 10-Oct-2015

You're welcome, Roy.

Comment from sbedian

Exceptional

I liked this one a lot, the ABAB rhyming style was really good, and the topic, which is finding meaning and purpose in life in the larger scheme of things is very profound. I liked the allusion to God and God's path for us, I feel the same way so it clicked with me in a way that was personal. I often wonder what I must do in "the bigger picture" to fit into my path that God would want. It's a big question. Good job!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015

Yes, God hides His treasures, so that we can find them, so that we seek and find much we hide Easter eggs from children, God want us to look and find, wonderful review, thank you, blessings, Roy.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Roy this so deserves a six. It is S for So wise I for intelligent and X for eXcellent
Well penned my friend. I have my plan I have my hand in Gods hand and I am going forward with your poem in mind
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks Jenny your approval is enough, great encouragement, thank you, blessing, Roy.

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Excellent message Roy! :)
I definitely feel the same way. I have thought and talked about this a lot. Do we have a special purpose in this world? Are we supposed to make a difference or change the world? Those are questions a lot of people wonder about. I think we are all special. But do we have a special purpose? I don't know. Maybe. Living our life helping others, being kind, cherishing what God gave us is something we should all do. Even if one person in your life comes up to you and says, "You really made a difference in my life," it is worth a million good deeds even if you didn't think you did much. Maybe just saying hello to someone could change their life. The little things in life make a difference. There has been a time in my life when I felt like I lost all hope, and no one loved me. It took that one person to smile at me and say something kind that brought me back to reality.
Thank you for always sending a special message to us Roy. It makes a difference to me.
Shana :)

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015

Thanks Shana, I think that all of us are unique, also I think all of us have personal understanding, God hides these treasures so we can find them, like we hide Easter eggs from kids, so they can find, the same with God, but it's in loving service to others we can all excel, and we can all do that, that is our true purpose, in writing, you can write eloquent words to encourage, that's a super vision, wonderful review again, thank you, blessings, Roy.

Comment from TomyKan

Excellent

Your message of the importance of vision, dreams and aspirations is well expressed in this poem, which has good rhythm, rhyme and flow. We all need a sense of purpose to live a meaningful and happy life.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks, for this lovely review and encouraging words, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy.