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A touch of Fear

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Comment from TAB_that's me
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Oh wow! this is a great halloween story filled with all the right frightful things. Your poem is in great rhyme and meter. Good luck to you in the contest.
teresa

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
    Stank you Teresa. Glad you liked it. Appreciate the best wishes.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Halloween can be a scary time to of year for some people while others go and sit in the cemetery. I don't know if I believe in ghosts or not but I know I don't want to push my luck. Great job

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015

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    Thank you Ex.
Comment from mvbrooks
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Timely poem with October starting. The poem starts with common Halloween elements like ghosts and the risen-dead--what sets it apart from other holiday poems is the final two lines that cleverly move the story from "horror" movie-stuff to "delight" in children's enjoyment. Enjoyed the clever, positive ending.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
    Thank you mvbrooks.
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Halloween is such spooky fun! Gotta love those costumes. Some are pretty creative. Those little ghouls are really quite friendly so long as you have plenty of candy.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
    Thank you Cindy. Yup, that's the key.
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
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You captured the essence of Halloween! How fantastic this poem is and I love your picture you chose for it. It flows beautifully and paints a spooky picture for the season. Excellent word choice. Great rhymes and perfect mood. Good luck and happy writing!

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
    Thank you Onyx.
Comment from vapros
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This is a clever verse, well constructed with rhythm and rhyme, as it should. Halloween night is aptly described, with witches, goblins and ghouls - and a great punch line. I see a couple of words to be corrected: freight and neigh.
Good work.

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015

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    Thank you vapors.