Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from indigloaura
I am VERY worried about Jim. And I'm very worried about your orange Tabby. Hope he makes his way home. I love the way you mix the Southwestern Native American culture with modern LE tactics. The description of the sounds of the guns was fantastic. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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I am VERY worried about Jim. And I'm very worried about your orange Tabby. Hope he makes his way home. I love the way you mix the Southwestern Native American culture with modern LE tactics. The description of the sounds of the guns was fantastic. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. AJ made it home safely and has since decided to spend every other night outside. His lips are sealed about what he's doing.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Barb
_ Uh-oh--looks as if Jim will be received TLC from Soni this time--no matter how angry she claims he might be at him. (*<*)
_ Good chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Hi, Barb
_ Uh-oh--looks as if Jim will be received TLC from Soni this time--no matter how angry she claims he might be at him. (*<*)
_ Good chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from royowen
Poor old Jim took a bullet at the end i hope he's OK. Well the cavalry has arrived in the nick of time, otherwise Jim, Soni and Tatiana may have been bullet bait, this is well written and most enjoyable, The Kuruk beat appearing and disappearing again, that'll mess them. Well done, blessings, Roy
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Poor old Jim took a bullet at the end i hope he's OK. Well the cavalry has arrived in the nick of time, otherwise Jim, Soni and Tatiana may have been bullet bait, this is well written and most enjoyable, The Kuruk beat appearing and disappearing again, that'll mess them. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
No, oh no - not Jim getting shot. This is fantastic action, a really pumped up chapter which I found quite gripping. Your ending is tantalising, now we just want to know how Jim is going to get on, Giddy
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No, oh no - not Jim getting shot. This is fantastic action, a really pumped up chapter which I found quite gripping. Your ending is tantalising, now we just want to know how Jim is going to get on, Giddy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
"Aren't they a pretty sight. To be honest, I was getting a little worried myself."
Excellent dialogue--as above--highlights this chapter, Barbara.
Soni and Tatiana are tough ladies, not afraid to use the guns they apparently know well how to use.
Seems like Kuruk's spirit may have taken on the form of a black bear. I love the way it appears and disappears.
Great job.
For consideration:
'I wonder why? Jim watched one man aim (at?) it.'
:) Bev
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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"Aren't they a pretty sight. To be honest, I was getting a little worried myself."
Excellent dialogue--as above--highlights this chapter, Barbara.
Soni and Tatiana are tough ladies, not afraid to use the guns they apparently know well how to use.
Seems like Kuruk's spirit may have taken on the form of a black bear. I love the way it appears and disappears.
Great job.
For consideration:
'I wonder why? Jim watched one man aim (at?) it.'
:) Bev
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Good work, yet again. Always glad to see you come up with another chapter. I am still doing some new chapters to my Autobiography before I do the big REVIVE Certificate review so keep your eyes peeled. Just one tiny little spag. "Aren't they a pretty sight[.](?)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Good work, yet again. Always glad to see you come up with another chapter. I am still doing some new chapters to my Autobiography before I do the big REVIVE Certificate review so keep your eyes peeled. Just one tiny little spag. "Aren't they a pretty sight[.](?)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the catch and I will fix it. I appreciate your review.
Comment from c_lucas
Very good detailed action post. When Jim took a bullet, I wondered if Soni had fired it. This is very well written with very good imagery. Well Don.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Very good detailed action post. When Jim took a bullet, I wondered if Soni had fired it. This is very well written with very good imagery. Well Don.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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LOL, Soni just might have. Thankk you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. Sorry to hear that Jim got hit.
Jim watched one man aim (at) it.
As the bullet whizzed by the bear's head, it (the bear) disappeared.
Two of the helicopter (helicopters) hovered over the band of determined Los Zetas that still headed toward them.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Good chapter, Barbara. Sorry to hear that Jim got hit.
Jim watched one man aim (at) it.
As the bullet whizzed by the bear's head, it (the bear) disappeared.
Two of the helicopter (helicopters) hovered over the band of determined Los Zetas that still headed toward them.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Sasha
This was very tense and brilliantly written. I felt I was in the middle of the action. I found one minor spag you may want to look at:
Two of the helicopter hovered...you need to add an 's' to helicopter...
I can only assume that Jim is going to be okay...he can't die, he still needs to get Soni to fall in love with him.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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This was very tense and brilliantly written. I felt I was in the middle of the action. I found one minor spag you may want to look at:
Two of the helicopter hovered...you need to add an 's' to helicopter...
I can only assume that Jim is going to be okay...he can't die, he still needs to get Soni to fall in love with him.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Oh so true. Thank you for the kind review.
