Short Form Poetry
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16 total reviews
Comment from Realist101
HA! Love this clever and fun poem Michael! What an imagination you have! I love all birds, and these two species can't be more different, but each special in their own ways! Nice work and best of luck in the contest! Suse
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HA! Love this clever and fun poem Michael! What an imagination you have! I love all birds, and these two species can't be more different, but each special in their own ways! Nice work and best of luck in the contest! Suse
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
Comment from ann marie mazz
good morning
this entry is brilliant
I enjoyed the message
your words are fabulous
the format is true to form
all is well in the creation and execution
the presentation is lovely
in short
well done in all areas
my money is on the penguin with his response
thank you for sharing your talent
enjoy the morning and day
ann marie
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good morning
this entry is brilliant
I enjoyed the message
your words are fabulous
the format is true to form
all is well in the creation and execution
the presentation is lovely
in short
well done in all areas
my money is on the penguin with his response
thank you for sharing your talent
enjoy the morning and day
ann marie
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
Nice 5/7/5 poem entry for the bye bye blackbird contest. Good syllable count which is very important for this type of contest. Good job!
gypsy
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Hello :)
Nice 5/7/5 poem entry for the bye bye blackbird contest. Good syllable count which is very important for this type of contest. Good job!
gypsy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
Comment from mvbrooks
Interesting use of title to "sneak in" another line--not sure how that will play with the contest rules, but without the title/fourth line the poem seems incomplete. That's why the rating of 4 -- because it seems incomplete without that "fourth" line.
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Interesting use of title to "sneak in" another line--not sure how that will play with the contest rules, but without the title/fourth line the poem seems incomplete. That's why the rating of 4 -- because it seems incomplete without that "fourth" line.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Penguins smart enough to participate from a distance. Well written poem with a nifty little message. Should also be a good contest entry.
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Penguins smart enough to participate from a distance. Well written poem with a nifty little message. Should also be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an interesting personification of the eagle gloating over the penguins self-righteously about his partaking and the penguins only observing. Nicely illustrated. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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This is an interesting personification of the eagle gloating over the penguins self-righteously about his partaking and the penguins only observing. Nicely illustrated. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello, A cute part of a dialogue where it might be too cold for an Eagle to roam. The Penguins will participate from a distance. Good luck and cheers.
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Hello, A cute part of a dialogue where it might be too cold for an Eagle to roam. The Penguins will participate from a distance. Good luck and cheers.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
This is very clever. I was confused at first as to how the 5-7-5 worked with this, but then I realized that the poem only began with the penguins' reply, and that the Eagle's taunt was, in fact, the title.
I predict a contest win with this one! It's awesome.
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This is very clever. I was confused at first as to how the 5-7-5 worked with this, but then I realized that the poem only began with the penguins' reply, and that the Eagle's taunt was, in fact, the title.
I predict a contest win with this one! It's awesome.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, the eagle mocking the penguin and the penguins answering back smartly, love the picture. good luck in the contest
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, the eagle mocking the penguin and the penguins answering back smartly, love the picture. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
Quite thought provoking. Of course, it is the eagle`s existence most would envy. One might consider the penguin shortchanged even.
But there are aspects of penguin life the eagle cannot expetiene, deep sea diving, a group interaction etc. This is surely the winner. Can`t ask for much more considering the restrictions.
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Quite thought provoking. Of course, it is the eagle`s existence most would envy. One might consider the penguin shortchanged even.
But there are aspects of penguin life the eagle cannot expetiene, deep sea diving, a group interaction etc. This is surely the winner. Can`t ask for much more considering the restrictions.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
