Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Interesting message -- that our imagination can impact our view and help us see things "just out of reach" (peripheral). Meets the line and syllable requirement.

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015

Thank you:)

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Teresa;
-a great universal way at looking at the word, concession and relativity of the word imagination which to me is very inventive and ingeniously created.
-Your 5/7/5 syllabic format relates and is comparable to your writing and your idea of imagination.
-I find the pictures just outstandingly chosen and I believe it is very relative and complementary to your writing.
-A spectacular 5/7/5 syllabic format where I wish you good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
PS: It's a great writing to make one think

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015

Thank you Alex for the awesome review!

reply by krys123 on 03-Oct-2015

You are so welcome Teresa