Creepy Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Pagan Path"A touch of Fear
17 total reviews
Comment from artemis53
Beautiful piece that you walked me through. The woods are my favorite place so this one was a winner for me even if on subject alone. It brought back some very fond memories.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Beautiful piece that you walked me through. The woods are my favorite place so this one was a winner for me even if on subject alone. It brought back some very fond memories.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Thank you you Artemis, I knew that would your type of trail.
Comment from AnnieDawn
A beautifully written poem with a good flow and rhyme to it. The misty picture adds some mystery to the poetry. Great poem and great job. I really liked your poem.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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A beautifully written poem with a good flow and rhyme to it. The misty picture adds some mystery to the poetry. Great poem and great job. I really liked your poem.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you Annie Cawn.
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
I can definitely see how your photograph inspires such creative thought for this work. Your poem is very fluid and sparks one's imagination and curiosity. I enjoyed it very much. Very well constructed. I also appreciate your notes on the meaning and origin of the word "pagan". I learned something. Good luck in all of your writing endeavors! :)
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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I can definitely see how your photograph inspires such creative thought for this work. Your poem is very fluid and sparks one's imagination and curiosity. I enjoyed it very much. Very well constructed. I also appreciate your notes on the meaning and origin of the word "pagan". I learned something. Good luck in all of your writing endeavors! :)
Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you OnyxSapphire, for you wonderful review and comments.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Fabulous poetry, Tom--simply outstanding! Were you aware that I have more of your poetry bookmarked than any other of the many wonderful poets who grace the pages of this website with their talent? It's true, I do.
This was exceptionally well done--stark, eerie, and quite vivid imagery, perfect rhyme, cadence and flow, and unique formatting. The only problem I have with reading this is a used my very last six star rating on the post just prior to reading this. If I'd had one, it would certainly be yours!
Great work, Tom. I'm adding this to your bookmarked totals, my talented friend.
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Fabulous poetry, Tom--simply outstanding! Were you aware that I have more of your poetry bookmarked than any other of the many wonderful poets who grace the pages of this website with their talent? It's true, I do.
This was exceptionally well done--stark, eerie, and quite vivid imagery, perfect rhyme, cadence and flow, and unique formatting. The only problem I have with reading this is a used my very last six star rating on the post just prior to reading this. If I'd had one, it would certainly be yours!
Great work, Tom. I'm adding this to your bookmarked totals, my talented friend.
~Dean :}
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Thank you Dean. That is a great honor, and I really appreciate it.
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You're more than welcome, Tom. :}
~Dean
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I can see why you thought that of this pathway through the woods, it does look ancient and would look very foreboding at night. What a delightful picture and poem, perfect partnership as usual, my talented friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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I can see why you thought that of this pathway through the woods, it does look ancient and would look very foreboding at night. What a delightful picture and poem, perfect partnership as usual, my talented friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Thank you Sandra. Always great to get your feedback.
Comment from Alan K Pease
Your poem carried your message well setting forth the mystery of the path with the dual meaning of the word "pagan." The use of rhyme in places is excellent. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Your poem carried your message well setting forth the mystery of the path with the dual meaning of the word "pagan." The use of rhyme in places is excellent. Excellent work.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Thank you very much Alan for your time and excellent comments.
Comment from rod007
I'm certainly not going there alone---too creepy. A well-written poem that brings the reader onto that treacherous path.
Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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I'm certainly not going there alone---too creepy. A well-written poem that brings the reader onto that treacherous path.
Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Thank you Rod.
Comment from robyn corum
I like this poem very much, Tom, as I do most of your work. It may be one of my favorites...
It is a bit bewitching, and it's subject matter leaves a lot with the reader...which is very nice!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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I like this poem very much, Tom, as I do most of your work. It may be one of my favorites...
It is a bit bewitching, and it's subject matter leaves a lot with the reader...which is very nice!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Methane you Robyn. I appreciate you time and comments.
Comment from RGstar
Nicely done, Treischel. More in this message than meets the eye. Cleverly written. Good to see you letting loose.I didn't need to check your notes t5o see that this was not the structured variant of which you are a master.
Keep writing, my friend.
My best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Nicely done, Treischel. More in this message than meets the eye. Cleverly written. Good to see you letting loose.I didn't need to check your notes t5o see that this was not the structured variant of which you are a master.
Keep writing, my friend.
My best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Thank you very much RG, for the review and the encouragement.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for teaching us the derivation of "pagan" and sharing the wonderful photograph that inspired this work. I admired your choice of the free style form with your rhymes and use of alliteration. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Thank you for teaching us the derivation of "pagan" and sharing the wonderful photograph that inspired this work. I admired your choice of the free style form with your rhymes and use of alliteration. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Thank you Joan. Always enjoy hearing from you.
