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Bigfoot at a Halloween Party

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Comment from barkingdog
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Well, at least he won the golden apple and had fun with the look-a-like Bigfoots. I liked that the cat knew who he was all along.
I enjoyed watching all of the party animals, knowing the real Bigfoot was there all the time.
Great story. Very enjoyable.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from RW Kelley
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It was a very good story, and I was smiling at the end. I can't really make any suggestions for improvements. I really liked the cat becoming a real character at the end and the remark. I really do believe we human beings often miss the obvious.

Nice story!

Bob

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Jackreese
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Sounds like a wild party I don't think anyone would've been able to spot the real Trump in a room full of them. I like how Bigfoot decided to go with the flow and have a good time and made a friend.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from country ranch writer
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people don't know what is right in front of their noses it is like that in a lot of places believe me right in plain sight and they cant see it

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
reply by country ranch writer on 18-Nov-2015
    s m i l e
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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What an imagination to make such a wonderful piece.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and found no problems.
Very well written

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from ciliverde
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This is very cute, I love it. How funny that he managed to crash a Bigfoot costume party! Also hilarious is that fact that he lost the Bigfoot lookalike contest! The really great part came at the end, where the cat speaks to him. (I'd put that part either in quotes, or italicize.) I loved what she said to him too. Silly humans! Yes, the certainly are. Wonderful job!
-Carol

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Love your encouraging review. I can't seem to get away from Bigfoot. Thanks so much. Elaine
reply by ciliverde on 25-Sep-2015
    Lol! Bigfoot is quite compelling, you get no argument from me :)