Comment from P1

Excellent

such a strong piece of writing
all the things you mention i'd love
to do.. i would love to hear the music
to this. it got my foot tapping by just
reading the words. thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Thanks, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, I did forgive mum, blessings, Roy.

Comment from RahulChadha

Exceptional

Beautiful, this is more like a have you ever lived your life to it's fullest?
Wonderful work and imagination. It deserves a 6 star

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Thank you so much for this wonderful response and great comments to my work, and very generous rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Ekim777

Excellent

My dear artistic friend maybe the final verse is a bit high-flown and spurious. Why should we do these things. There are to kinds of folks; Those with soul will dance. Dance will embrace all of us. We lesser mortals will try to write poetry and hope the soul creeps in to reveal itself. Let us keep our eyes and ears pealed. P.S. I think I have been to the well -spring of the sea. -EKim777

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Thanks, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi
This is a lovely written song, some beautiful words I would love to hear it sung. It does read a a very good blank verse.
Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Thanks Mary, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Hey Roy
John 14:9 "Jesus said to him, " Have I been with you all this time Philip, and you still do not know me? Whoever has seen me has seen the Father. How can you say, 'show us the Father'? <<Bear

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Thanks Bear for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Many questions asked, many answers given
Many days have past, but time can be forgiven
Time it waits for no man to achieve these things its clear
There is really no master plan, No blueprint in life to adhere

Many solutions here, depends on how they're approached
Let me make it clear, it's my integrity you have encroached
You follow here just one higher man, he is the man called God
You certainly are his biggest fan, and you know the path he's trod

Take your life in both hands now, run with it like hell
I think one really understands how the Lord can get you in his spell
I've seen life from both sides now, I've seen the dark side too
Now the lord has me in his power. his path's what I pursue

dip

respect always, well written as usual

dip

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Well written Dip, have you posted this or just to shown me, is it written on behalf of me or for yourself, it's a good job, good rhythm, rhyme and very lyrical, well done, my friend, thanks blessings, Roy.

reply by DR DIP on 26-Sep-2015

I wrote that in response to your wonderful poem on the spot lol

thank dip

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

A very beautiful poem of faith. I like how your questions pulled me into your musings and meditations about the love and grace of God. This poem also must have sounded great when you sung it. Your message is deep and sincere. There is a purity in your heart which showed and flowed through your words. Thank you for sharing and caring.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Thanks Cat, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

I think you are correct in calling this blank verse. It flows very well. I like the questions that are very metaphysical. The repetition of the format of questions bring in the mystery of religious belief.

It kind of reminds me of Pocahontas talking to Grandmother willow or the song "The Color of the Wind" from the same movie.

Keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Thanks Joan, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, that was just a beautiful song, highlighting the realm outside of us, blessings, Roy.

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Sep-2015

You're welcome, Roy.

Joan

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Exceptional

Wow and I don't know what else to say.
Absolutely wonderfully written and feeling expressed in question form.
Love the words you used to ask the questions...so descriptive as to leave the reader wanting more.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Thanks Barb for this wonderfully complimentary review and words of encouragement, I appreciate them, blessings, Roy.

Comment from pattipac

Exceptional

Love your song of praise, Roy. You have penned an eloquent picture in words of what it will be like when we see God face to face. Until then we can but wonder at our Creator's majesty and power.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015

Thanks Pat, for this outstanding review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the exceptional rating, blessings, Roy.