A danger lurks around our house
A minute Poem.24 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
You do dark poetry pretty well, Ine. Perhaps some cloves of garlic, a few sharpened stakes, and a crucifix or two would be in order. If I were you, I'd get started before the sun goes down!
Good luck in your contest.
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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You do dark poetry pretty well, Ine. Perhaps some cloves of garlic, a few sharpened stakes, and a crucifix or two would be in order. If I were you, I'd get started before the sun goes down!
Good luck in your contest.
~Dean :)
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday. I got some help with rhyme and meter.
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We all need a little help with such things from time to time, Ine. Lord knows I do, heh-heh!
You are more than welcome...
~Dean ;)
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I found this poem easy to read and understand, also quite frightening. For having no memory or concentration, you do a very good job. The artwork is truly gruesome. Good work.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Excellent. I found this poem easy to read and understand, also quite frightening. For having no memory or concentration, you do a very good job. The artwork is truly gruesome. Good work.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from vigournet
Thank you for your poem, greatly enhanced by the artwork and type. You have used your skill to create the correct features of a Minute poem, and achieved a simple but dramatic story. I'm sure the 'thud' noise leaves us waiting to the outcome.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Thank you for your poem, greatly enhanced by the artwork and type. You have used your skill to create the correct features of a Minute poem, and achieved a simple but dramatic story. I'm sure the 'thud' noise leaves us waiting to the outcome.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Ine,
You did a wonderful job in writing this poem. The picture that you found to go with your words, fits it perfectly. It seems you get better and better with each poem you write.
Kat
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Hi Ine,
You did a wonderful job in writing this poem. The picture that you found to go with your words, fits it perfectly. It seems you get better and better with each poem you write.
Kat
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday. I received very good help from somebody.
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It is wonderful when you can get help from others.
