Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Yuck! Don't tell the vampires where I live, or at least tell them to do it fast so I don't have to suffer. I love the picture, even though it's gross, because it goes perfect with your poem

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Robina this is a change for with your writing
It's like a horror, thriller minute poem.
that is well done.

Best to you in this contest.

Gert

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Great work with the minute format. It comes across like clockwork. You use present tense to make it sound like the danger is real and right on your doorstep. It does create a spooky mood. judi

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

reply by judiverse on 22-Sep-2015

You're very welcome. Take care. judi

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

Hi sweet girl, very well done on your minute poem...and a great Halloween poem too....I love the wording...and the picture perfect...well done....xxoo luff

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks so much for the lovely six, Linda. I got some help from a fellow poet.

reply by l.raven on 21-Sep-2015

you both did a great job...and you are so very welcome...have a wonderful evening...love xxoo

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Ine;
-The first two verses are grammatically congruent and then the third verse comes out of the wild and has no bearing with the other two.
-All of each of the rhyming's of each verse and each word were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line therefore making the rhythm to flow smoothly.
-The pictures definitely complementary, relative and congruent to the meaning of the concept of the writing.
-Good luck in the contest and made a good Lord be with you forever.
Alex

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Well, I certainly wouldn't want to be around that house. Nicely done for the contest.
The picture brings it home.
Good luck.
My best wishes,
RGstar

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

SCARY and a half! I'm not into vampires but you carried off this theme well, from the artwork, to establish the mood, to the final "thud"! I enjoyed your rhymed couplets in these quatrains as well. Best wishes in the Minute Poem contest and have a serene Sunday- Joan

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Dangers can come from every day house hold items. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.

reply by c_lucas on 21-Sep-2015

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

YuuuuuUUUUucccccCCCKKKK!

hhahhahahhahhzahhahahahha!

This is quite a gross poem, Ine! GREAT job!

Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A fun poem with appropriate presentation to coincide with the zombie craze and upcoming Halloween. Cute and playful with nice rhyming.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.