Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the color scheme. I am wondering about what is around your house. Hope it is not a vampire. I would find it easier to deal with a mouse. Great work.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Treischel

Exceptional

An excellent trip poke minute poem with a horror theme. Hey, I do recognize this too. Dean Kuch would be proud. Well done!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for the beautiful six.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Nice minute poem Ine. you have kept to the rules of the proper syllables. The image goes well with your poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This a good, solid competition entry you have crafted here. Great presentation and good choice of accompanying picture.

Good luck with this.
GMG

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Goodness me, that's a good one, Ine, and the picture, well that's a gruesome one! LOL. You certainly pulled out all the stops for this one, I think it's a brilliant contest entry. Good luck! xsx Sandra.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from petalangela

Excellent

I love the way this up dilates. It is HALLOWEEN season the poems today are dark I am in a dark place as you can see by my poem today. My friend has just shot himself

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

This reads and looks like a nightmare!
If I were you, I would be moving my house.

What does your little doggie think about all of this bloody stuff?

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

I question a mouse as being danger, but a nuisance is very possible. Has a great flow and smoothness. The rhyming is quite natural. LOL. I think it took me under a minute to read this. Wonderful. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very clever entry in this minute poetry contest Ine. An unusual one for you, it would probably suit Dean Kuch, or one the other horror authors. Well crafted, articulate, rhythmic with appropriate rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. True, he liked it.

reply by royowen on 21-Sep-2015

Well done,

Comment from Bryana

Exceptional

Dear Ine, yes it is scary, I would be scared
with noises like that, but I would be more
scared if it were people who were making
those noises.
Good luck in the contest.
Hugs

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks for the lovely six,