Comment from krys123

Excellent

Bill;
-your play on words and the way you capitulated the sounding of the cacophony and the euphomy of the words within your writing like a roller coaster of soundwaves.
-I like to you when you wrote is blind and mute and mostly deaf which I thought all meant the same thing. Chuckle!
-All throughout your writing was very humorous and somewhat the person was contemptuous but very funny.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and made a good Lord be with you always Bill.
Alex

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thank you, Alex, for the terrific review. Bill

reply by krys123 on 19-Sep-2015

Again you are very welcome Bell

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Bill, this is not like most of your poetry. I'd like to say I understand it. I'd really like that, because I think there is a socio/political underpinning that many will "get", and I feel so inadequate to the task.

Sorry, Bill. When you have a chance, at least put me in the arena with a few clues. LOL, I don't like this feeling.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

I recalled a rep from the 'Hemp Makes Sense' campaign of 1980-something standing before Congress looking like David Crosby (CSNY) in a cheap polyester leisure suit trying to get hemp legalized as a replacement for tobacco as a cash crop. HMS would have been better served by a circus clown.

reply by Jay Squires on 18-Sep-2015

Thanks for the illustration. It is political. I forgive myself. Okay, so it wasn't David Crosby, but someone who looked like him. That is image enough.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I am not sure if you mean those agitators who oppose everything decry religion, Communists maybe. I know it is tongue in cheek but I wanted to understand. Good use of rhyming and good touch of humour. faye

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thank you, Faye, for the 'on faith' review. It's not a deep or intensive portrait. Bill

Comment from Joyce Long

Excellent

Wonderful use of adjectives. I really didn't get the meaning of this poem even after other readings. Is this a person who through an under-dog himself goes to bad for others. If only a free lunch is his reward, he seems to be looking out for others and not himself.
I didn't see any errors or corrections to be made.
Sorry, that this is outside my understanding.
As I said, wonderful use of words.
Joyce 9-18-15

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thank you, Joyce, for giving this a look. It's not just for fun. Bill