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Comment from livelylinda
Beautiful poem/picture/music, Michael. Awesome. "Long as forever's promise", tugs at the heart. Keep beautifying my world with your words. Soft Thunder
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Beautiful poem/picture/music, Michael. Awesome. "Long as forever's promise", tugs at the heart. Keep beautifying my world with your words. Soft Thunder
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Hey Thunder...-smile- thank you...its always nice to hear your soft voice. I watched this "awesome" video a day or so ago...just cant rid of it. um...God of Wonders maybe...I don't remember and I cant seem to find it. It started in HD. footage of all the life forms on this home we call earth...just awesome video of His wondrous creation, then plant life from seed to freed, then went to the unimaginable complexity of thunderstorms that replenish our home continuously they actually give off gases that fertilize her. then on too the sun....and the mind numbing power of this star....but its not anywhere near the biggest there are stars that would swallow her up a million times...then on to harnessed energy...even light...weighs. it said the power contained in one tree...harnessed...can keep a dwelling in energy...electricity for...well I don't remember , but a long time...-smile-...ah it was wonderful...I'm gonna see if I can find it...I'll send it to you....love you Lady Michael
Comment from AlteredEgo
Great write. I love the first and last stanza. Rugged cross bore dumb prayer corner clutter thought of simpleton. Very moving. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Great write. I love the first and last stanza. Rugged cross bore dumb prayer corner clutter thought of simpleton. Very moving. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Hey Man...-smile- thank you so much...glad you enjoyed it. love Michael
Comment from RGstar
And to my good friend. I always call your pieces ' modern pieces' for the configuration is always seen through potent eyes, and if one looks closely, it is easy to see the artistry and configurations in the write. Perhaps not about grammar,but about colour, dedication to detail,and flair.
You keep writing, my brother.
Best wishes
RGstar
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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And to my good friend. I always call your pieces ' modern pieces' for the configuration is always seen through potent eyes, and if one looks closely, it is easy to see the artistry and configurations in the write. Perhaps not about grammar,but about colour, dedication to detail,and flair.
You keep writing, my brother.
Best wishes
RGstar
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Hey my hope to be...-smile-..thank you Brother. Your reviews honor me. thank you for taking the time. love you michael
Comment from Jaq Cee
Very well written as ever my friend. A lot to think about indeed.
"When living's dying turns around"... does it ever? I certainly hope so. I'm not sure I'll be seeing you in the afterlife my bro as my belief is not as strong, but when it is time, I sure hope so :).
Love the way you write Michael, :) Jaq xx
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Very well written as ever my friend. A lot to think about indeed.
"When living's dying turns around"... does it ever? I certainly hope so. I'm not sure I'll be seeing you in the afterlife my bro as my belief is not as strong, but when it is time, I sure hope so :).
Love the way you write Michael, :) Jaq xx
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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"sincerity makes the very least person to be of more value then the most talented of hypocrites" Charles Spurgeon. Our honesty leads us to Saving Grace. Yes...it does Jaq...look at your Daughter and wonder at the beauty of her creation....surely there is a God. My faith wanes at times, but at my core, my love for Jesus keeps me believing. -smile-...love you Lady michael
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I cannot deny that I've often looked at Michaela and wondered how I was so blessed to have such a beautiful soul as my daughter. Although I said my belief isn't as strong as yours, I have to say my prayers or I can't sleep...lol. Not sure of that is not more to do with being Catholic and it having been hammered home from a very early age. I do thank God each night in my prayers for all that is good and bad in my life as each is a lesson, but there is always a wee niggle at the back of my mind that wonders if there is anyone listening. :) Take care my dear friend Michael. Love and hugs, Jaq xx
Comment from crzypnter
Hi Michael,
This is a wonderful free verse of just how our faith can impact our lives. A love that will be everlasting when we accept him. The book of Job is one of my favorites as it is one the oldest. Great job an even read and flow
God bless
August
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Hi Michael,
This is a wonderful free verse of just how our faith can impact our lives. A love that will be everlasting when we accept him. The book of Job is one of my favorites as it is one the oldest. Great job an even read and flow
God bless
August
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Hi August...-smile-...thanks man...appreciate your review...love Michael
Comment from LeannaP
Dream running so slow,.. I
love this line. This is exactly how
I feel sometimes when I feel like
something I'm hoping for is not working out.
Exact wording and perfect phrase for your
message.
Great backdrop chosen for this piece as well.
Excellent work.
-Leanna
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Dream running so slow,.. I
love this line. This is exactly how
I feel sometimes when I feel like
something I'm hoping for is not working out.
Exact wording and perfect phrase for your
message.
Great backdrop chosen for this piece as well.
Excellent work.
-Leanna
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Hi Leanna...-smile- thank you very much. yea I know the feeling...sucks. love Michael
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hi Michael,
your very welcome
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. It is free verse with loads of alliteration. Kissing God is the subject. He made Christmas white a.o.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. It is free verse with loads of alliteration. Kissing God is the subject. He made Christmas white a.o.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Happy Saturday Sister...-smile- thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it. love Michael
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, Michael, you did an excellent job writing this tercet poem about the God that creates a life worth living by transforming that life through forgiveness and salvation
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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this is an excellent write, Michael, you did an excellent job writing this tercet poem about the God that creates a life worth living by transforming that life through forgiveness and salvation
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Hi Pam....-smile- ...yea, except it aint easy...or else He wouldn't have said "many will come to me saying Lord I served you this way and that" paraphrased...and He says "depart from Me you worker of iniquity...I never knew you" also "the road to heaven is straight and narrow...and few find it" I knew some folk who really believe that they...you or I...can ask for forgiveness and receive it, every time we sin...infinitum. and so they become lil' devils turning their sin in every Sunday in exchange for a clean new suit to cover their dirt.
yes I believe we can be and are forgiven...when in broken heart contrition we ask in sincerity...yes even every time...if...and only if we are truly sold to the love of Jesus...in most thought and deed. I believe it is a fool who thinks he or she can commit the most heinous of sin and offer them at the alter continuously...believing the soul is not seen through the suit. -smile-...well amen...love Michael
Comment from TPAC
Yeah what a blade. Writer expresses themselves well in creative line structuring and poetic descriptive expressions. I found interesting in its presentation.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Yeah what a blade. Writer expresses themselves well in creative line structuring and poetic descriptive expressions. I found interesting in its presentation.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Hi Tpac...-smile- ..thank you man...much appreciated....love Michael
Comment from RahulChadha
Very well written poetry, wonderfull vocabulary, and nicely shaped work. It didn't rhyme but every poem doesn't rhyme.
Best of luck and best wishes :)))))
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Very well written poetry, wonderfull vocabulary, and nicely shaped work. It didn't rhyme but every poem doesn't rhyme.
Best of luck and best wishes :)))))
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Hey Rahul...-smile- thank you man...yea well my rhyme has lil' reason and bigger rhythm. I believe in natural movement, whether be bowel or broader poetic expressions. I also dance in my socks....love Michael
