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8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
This is a very ingenious poem about a poor fellow who was killed by his son by accident. I like the sound of the words you chose and it has a nice rhyme. Good job!
~gypsy
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Hello :)
This is a very ingenious poem about a poor fellow who was killed by his son by accident. I like the sound of the words you chose and it has a nice rhyme. Good job!
~gypsy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Thank you. GBR, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from robyn corum
1.) (that's?) we all could see
2.) aimed it at Dad's back and--son,
made Rac a gunshotee
--> FUNNY! -- oh, wait....not. *smile*
3.) It was too late for saving him
he'd joined the ranks of post mortem
--> VERY well done!
Great job on this one!
I enjoyed!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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1.) (that's?) we all could see
2.) aimed it at Dad's back and--son,
made Rac a gunshotee
--> FUNNY! -- oh, wait....not. *smile*
3.) It was too late for saving him
he'd joined the ranks of post mortem
--> VERY well done!
Great job on this one!
I enjoyed!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Robyn, for the excellent review. "...had a tattoo on his belly of a skunk that we could see..."
Happy day.
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--hugs !
Comment from Neonewman
I enjoyed reading through this whimsical piece you have so wonderfully crafted. The flow was so incredible smooth and moved like silk. I love this in a piece.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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I enjoyed reading through this whimsical piece you have so wonderfully crafted. The flow was so incredible smooth and moved like silk. I love this in a piece.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Steve, for the excellent review. Bill
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you are most welcome
Comment from Nosha17
This was fun with a good message. It warns people that guns are not playthings, but do seriously kill, as Mr Raccoonoodle found out. Good use of rhyming and satire. Great pic. Faye
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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This was fun with a good message. It warns people that guns are not playthings, but do seriously kill, as Mr Raccoonoodle found out. Good use of rhyming and satire. Great pic. Faye
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Nosha, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from amada
A very tragic-comic account. This influences me loathing for guns. Nevertheless this story keeps the reader's attention, each line a rhyming feast. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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A very tragic-comic account. This influences me loathing for guns. Nevertheless this story keeps the reader's attention, each line a rhyming feast. Best wishes.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Amada, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Eric1
Hi Bill, this is a wonderful and very humourous tongue in cheek poem, tragic tale of a young child playing with a loaded gun, thoroughly enjoyed your brilliantly rhyming verse my friend.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Hi Bill, this is a wonderful and very humourous tongue in cheek poem, tragic tale of a young child playing with a loaded gun, thoroughly enjoyed your brilliantly rhyming verse my friend.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Eric, for the excellent review. Bill
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from TAB_that's me
You are one crazy guy, you know that. Just the title alone made me laugh and I knew before I started the whole thing would be crazy!
teresa
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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You are one crazy guy, you know that. Just the title alone made me laugh and I knew before I started the whole thing would be crazy!
teresa
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Teresa, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from krys123
Bill;
-I truly enjoyed your excellently written imagination which was truly inventive and ingeniously creative throughout the writing. Your cleverness is without boundaries
in your infused writing of the names were enjoyable to read.
-The imagery was exquisitely expressive and vividly descriptive throughout the writing.
-This could make an excellent detective movie but basically a comedy.
-The picture was very appropriate and complementary to the poem
-. Thanks for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Bill;
-I truly enjoyed your excellently written imagination which was truly inventive and ingeniously creative throughout the writing. Your cleverness is without boundaries
in your infused writing of the names were enjoyable to read.
-The imagery was exquisitely expressive and vividly descriptive throughout the writing.
-This could make an excellent detective movie but basically a comedy.
-The picture was very appropriate and complementary to the poem
-. Thanks for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Alex, for the enthusiastic and motivating review. Bill
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You are welcome Bill
