Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Oh, Bill, that is choice! So funny, but with content. On radio (and in print) we can be whatever we want ... until someone breaks down the door and exposes us for what we are.
Sometimes we are what we boast about, and then all they've done is broken down the door.

Who fixes the freakin' door then! Huh? Who?

Oh, thanks for the reminder on Trampus and grampus, though I wouldn't offer myself as a dictionary source to the reader, who might be offended and want to shriek out: "I knew that. I knew what braggawhatever means.

Thanks for making my load a little lighter, friend.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you, Jay, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

Great poem! I so enjoyed the read and the athor's comments brought me back to the Gunsmoke shows with Matt Dillon , Kitty, Chester, Festus, and Trampus! The rhymes were clever, "gramps, Trampus, and Grampus", "spiel, zeal, and chamomile"!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you, Ginny, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

1.) He broadcasted from (D- 'on the') campus

2..) and a face fit for a grampus
and surely the radio
--> very nice!

3.) my favorite:
Eventually, the door burst in
as he sat with a toothy grin
dressed in just his naked skin
and braggadocio

hahahahahahaha

Great job!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you, Robyn, for the excellent review. Bill