Comment from janxavier

Excellent

I love the way you have described this woman. looking at the way you ve written she sure seems to be like someone who is powerful yet humble. I have not heard of her though. thank u for the poem . Kudos to u . keep writing

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015

Thank you very much:)

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Well written poem that clearly depicts age is just a number. Notes interesting also. Just because you reach 70 years old does not mean life is over. In many cases it is just beginning.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015

Thank you Brett:)

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is a great tribute to this woman dear Teresa! She seems like a strong woman who doesn't take shite from anyone. These people we need more.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015

Thanks rebekka:)

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

You paint a personal portrait of this woman of faith who has touched your soul with the fire of her personality and strong faith. Thank for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015

Thank you very much;)

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

Your lovely poem captures both physicality, the faith and personality of this woman. It also communicates the fine respect you hold for her abilities, her energy and calling. She would love this, I'm sure. I really liked the part of your tribute:
A reedy voice belted
praise and glory.
There's no one quite like
God's own Patsy Clairmont.

With her red-hot spark
fires were lit!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015

Thank you so much:)

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I love to people watch...and she would be a good one to observe. You can tell she loves much just by that smile...
Well penned and great photograph
God bless

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015

Thank you Jenny:)

Comment from Christof McTarnahan

Excellent

A nice poem describing someone you hold dear. I can feel the admiration you have for this woman in every word. I can tell you chose the descriptors very carefully. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015

Thank you so much:)

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Teresa - a wonderfully descriptive piece about this woman. More work to add to your book. You really are very good at describing people. Good author notes, interesting. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015

Thank you Dorothy. I appreciate your reviews.

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hi TAB. Wonderful and thoughtful tribute to Patsy. I'm not familiar with her however, you illustrate her well in your poem even venturing to tell us her age. Cheers.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015

Thank you Benjamin. Your reviews are always appreciated. I always try to reciprocate but I don't review chapters. I always check though to see if you have posted a short story or poem:)

reply by Benjamin Valencia on 05-Sep-2015

Hi TAB, I completely understand. Sometimes I'm the same way cause its hard trying to jump into the middle of chapter. I don't like feeling like Jesus in the lost Wilderness. Heh heh. Cheers.

Comment from Rubylou

Excellent

Hi
I like the very visual description of the power-house lady. I can see her petite frame with loud clothing and jewelry. I can also hear the silence just as she steps up and her," reedy voice,' takes the room by storm.
I never heard of her or her mission but she does sound like someone I'd check out if in my area. I love the spunky wisdom of older ladies.
Rubylou

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015

You would love her and the other Women of Faith speakers! Thanks so much.