Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Absolutely well said in such a short piece.
Emotion held through and a message to remind us of God's teaching.
Rhyme and rhythm are spot on and easy to understand

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks so much Barb, for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

A beautiful and matching photo that complements your poem perfectly. Life is filled with trepidation. Who knows what is true or false. Jesus solves this all, and you won't thirst.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks so much Ine, for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from snooker155

Good

thank you for a very inspiring poem but the last line seemed as if you were just finding a word to rhyme with folk otherwise a very good effort.

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thank you for the review, Roy.

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hi Royowen. Yes, how could we read false from true? How about truth from false? How could we know? Perhaps, humanity is and has always been naïve; conditioned to be so because of the old saying; Lie to people long enough, and they'll eventually believe it.
I feel your message is simply being kind to others likely because in the end, that's all we could really do, the only logical thing to do. Thanks for this. Cheers.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks so much Benjamin for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Too true. This reminds me of that son "I beg your pardon, I never promised you a rose garden". If we never experience the downside we wouldn't be able to appreciate the the high point. Good, steady rhythm and rhyming couplets.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Wise words Roy. We should all work hard to live by the powerful message in your words. It pains my heart to see so many people treated different from another. I've had this happen to me as well. It makes you feel like your not as good as everyone else, and that your beneath others. Everyone should be given a chance as an equal no matter what their race is, their religion, education, or if their male or female. We were all made by the same creator.
Shana :)

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

I agree with you Shana, in God's eyes we're all incalculably valuable, and should treat each other honourably. Thanks for the insightful and delightful review and connection, blessings, Roy.

Comment from jmdg1954

Exceptional

I found this extremely well written. Starting with the photo, saying that we can work and live together as one, through the words of your poetry, you spread the hope.
Well done, my friend.
John

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks John with gratitude and appreciation for uplifting review, and great comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

It all seems so simple, doesn't it? Do unto others...? Honor others, but don't put anyone on a pedestal. Your poem is timely as we are in crisis. Well constructed and rhymed.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks Marilyn for the great review relevant comments, appreciated blessings, Roy.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I love the art work so much here
for these wonderful words you have written
How true the words you wrote here
Loved reading this.

Annie

I have no six left unfortunately

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks Annie, your approval is enough, and thanks for the great review relevant comments, appreciated blessings, Roy.

reply by honeytree on 02-Sep-2015

I enjoyed what you wrote

Annie

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks Annie.

reply by honeytree on 02-Sep-2015

That's fine

Annie

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Well done. Should frame this one. I have always taught, you will catch more flys with honey than salt. LOL. The Word, as you know is always rich either in poetry or story. You bring to it to life in both. Thanks, Bro.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks Ben, your encouragement is always welcome dear friend, my appreciation, blessings, bro, blessings, Roy.