With trepidation...
Life is paved.92 total reviews
Comment from CR Delport
Sometimes you have to walk a hard path in life to get to where you need to go, although we don't always understand it. This is very well written. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Sometimes you have to walk a hard path in life to get to where you need to go, although we don't always understand it. This is very well written. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much Christelle, for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from watergirl
Yes and with humility at our elbow we will find our way through the crowd.
I like your poem about learning life's lessons. The need for struggle to teach us the important things we need to overcome. The picture accentuates the need to relate to humanity and embrace all.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Yes and with humility at our elbow we will find our way through the crowd.
I like your poem about learning life's lessons. The need for struggle to teach us the important things we need to overcome. The picture accentuates the need to relate to humanity and embrace all.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from samsaysagain
Excellent. You call upon the wisdom found in the bible. What better rock for foundation could there be than Jesus! This is wonderfully written and deserves commendation for it. The world needs more of this type poetry. Thanks again.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Excellent. You call upon the wisdom found in the bible. What better rock for foundation could there be than Jesus! This is wonderfully written and deserves commendation for it. The world needs more of this type poetry. Thanks again.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Michelle Joy
Wow. I love this, excellent word-choice, I love all the colors you used as well. This poem flowed very nicely, well done.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Wow. I love this, excellent word-choice, I love all the colors you used as well. This poem flowed very nicely, well done.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much Michelle, for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from lightink
Yes, we are living in the age of self centeredness while ironically we don't quite have real self-love - the self-compassionate acceptance of our weaknesses that allows us to actually admit them and work on them. Thank you for this wonderful thought-provoking piece, my friend!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Yes, we are living in the age of self centeredness while ironically we don't quite have real self-love - the self-compassionate acceptance of our weaknesses that allows us to actually admit them and work on them. Thank you for this wonderful thought-provoking piece, my friend!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A timely message, my friend, and something we should all think about in a world that has become increasingly more selfish. I like the way you use words to create a pathway to understanding a message that is more meaningful when discovered. Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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A timely message, my friend, and something we should all think about in a world that has become increasingly more selfish. I like the way you use words to create a pathway to understanding a message that is more meaningful when discovered. Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much Rhonda, for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent message using some of my favorite passages. Very nice aabb rhyme and internal rhyme. Good use of alliteration throughout.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Excellent message using some of my favorite passages. Very nice aabb rhyme and internal rhyme. Good use of alliteration throughout.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much Janet, for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from artemis53
I enjoyed your comparisons in this piece for a positive shall always have a negative in which we may tell the difference. You are always sustained by your faith. I am always taught by mine.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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I enjoyed your comparisons in this piece for a positive shall always have a negative in which we may tell the difference. You are always sustained by your faith. I am always taught by mine.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from poetadeu
This is an impressive read and with firm
foundation to add the concrete truth in the
words. We are a fortress when united, but
like ants who haven't a colony. They are a
good example of what can be accomplished as
a unit. Your scriptures were a good addition.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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This is an impressive read and with firm
foundation to add the concrete truth in the
words. We are a fortress when united, but
like ants who haven't a colony. They are a
good example of what can be accomplished as
a unit. Your scriptures were a good addition.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much for the encouraging and uplifting review, comments and generous rating, blessings, Roy.
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It's a pleasure!
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It's a pleasure!
Comment from seaglass
It seems that respect and common courtesy has become unacceptable. Rudeness, mean spirited dialog, and sharp elbows are now the norm. Ir's paraded before us in social media, reality shows, and politicians...it grieves me as a Christian. Thanks for speaking up for the message of our Lord.
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It seems that respect and common courtesy has become unacceptable. Rudeness, mean spirited dialog, and sharp elbows are now the norm. Ir's paraded before us in social media, reality shows, and politicians...it grieves me as a Christian. Thanks for speaking up for the message of our Lord.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks for the supportive review, and the marvellous comments and exceptional rating, blessings, Rou.
