Comment from LeannaP

Excellent

Hi Royowen,
it's been awhile since I have reviewed one of your
poems. I really liked this one of yours.
Very clear and concise message about life
and its suggestibility.
It has great cadence, and
you transition well enough
so readers can follow you with ease.
Great message as well.
Leanna

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks Leanna, your review and encouragement are most welcome, your uplifting comments, also, blessings, Roy.

reply by LeannaP on 02-Sep-2015

Hi Roy!
your welcome!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

You have written another enjoyable poem. I like the message. You rhymes are natural. This flows very easily and is easy to read. Great job.

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015

Thanks again Michael for this wonderful review, blessings, Roy.