Unfetter the Spirit
free verse spiritual poem51 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
The spirituality message did indeed flow freely in this free verse poem. The complex identity of God is expressed beautifully. Stated with purpose, energy, and conviction. Well said.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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The spirituality message did indeed flow freely in this free verse poem. The complex identity of God is expressed beautifully. Stated with purpose, energy, and conviction. Well said.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks for the great review:)
Comment from LoannaLois
This is another wonderfully expressive poem worthy of a six. The building of this one was beautifully done. It was like a slow progression to the climax of "higher higher".
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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This is another wonderfully expressive poem worthy of a six. The building of this one was beautifully done. It was like a slow progression to the climax of "higher higher".
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much!
Comment from artemis53
Interesting take on your beliefs. My God has no limit and I accept that simply. I consider their is a reason that the Greeks used "Deus ex Machina" in their plays.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Interesting take on your beliefs. My God has no limit and I accept that simply. I consider their is a reason that the Greeks used "Deus ex Machina" in their plays.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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God has no limits:) we limit ourselves. thanks so much for the great review:)
Comment from honeytree
The art work is really great for
these words written.
Life to us all is a gift
How life began is amazing
in everyway and created in
a very special way for us all.
Honey tree
I have no six
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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The art work is really great for
these words written.
Life to us all is a gift
How life began is amazing
in everyway and created in
a very special way for us all.
Honey tree
I have no six
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Hi, great to see you. It has been awhile. Hope all is well with you. Thanks for the review:)
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Good to be back again
Thank you for your great review
Annie
Comment from Kingsland
I agree whole hardheartedly. I am one who never puts myself in a box. Why limit yourself from being a free thinking individual. This is a well written positive poetic voice that I enjoyed reading and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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I agree whole hardheartedly. I am one who never puts myself in a box. Why limit yourself from being a free thinking individual. This is a well written positive poetic voice that I enjoyed reading and written this response for... John
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much John:)
Comment from rjuselius
This is a profound piece of spiritual poetry dear Teresa! I love the concept of freeing your mind to understand the might of god.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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This is a profound piece of spiritual poetry dear Teresa! I love the concept of freeing your mind to understand the might of god.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you Rebekka for the awesome six stars!!
Comment from CelticSkye
Lovely, simply lovely. Makes you realize that just because you think you know God, you most likely don't. And THAT makes you think even more!!! I love poetry that makes you think and evaluate yourself because it has struck something inside you.
FANTASTIC! I LOVE THIS!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Lovely, simply lovely. Makes you realize that just because you think you know God, you most likely don't. And THAT makes you think even more!!! I love poetry that makes you think and evaluate yourself because it has struck something inside you.
FANTASTIC! I LOVE THIS!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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I'm glad this caused you to ponder life and God. Thanks so much:)
Comment from LeslieP5
It is true to try to tie down who, or what God is , is to limit Him and our spirit. Unfettered by reconceived notions God is limitless and if we let go of our constructs, our spirit can soar higher and higher. Well said.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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It is true to try to tie down who, or what God is , is to limit Him and our spirit. Unfettered by reconceived notions God is limitless and if we let go of our constructs, our spirit can soar higher and higher. Well said.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you Leslie:)
Comment from Jesse James Doty
What a provocative poem. The title says it all and so well. It is a well-written piece, and I must say it opens the concept of God in a way I hadn't heard or read before. Thank you for sharing with me.
Peace, Jesse James
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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What a provocative poem. The title says it all and so well. It is a well-written piece, and I must say it opens the concept of God in a way I hadn't heard or read before. Thank you for sharing with me.
Peace, Jesse James
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you Jesse:)
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi Tab.. This write was interesting because I feel as if you're not trying to push the reader into believing. It appears you're simply telling them to let go and find out for themselves. Good flow here the end of which describes ascension. Cheers.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Hi Tab.. This write was interesting because I feel as if you're not trying to push the reader into believing. It appears you're simply telling them to let go and find out for themselves. Good flow here the end of which describes ascension. Cheers.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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exactly. thanks so much.
