River Song
Luna20 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Lovely, Pili. Lovely words and a lovely picture to go with it. It's wonderful to see you back on here again. I hope you are feeling much better. Good luck in the contest! :) Sandra. xsx
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Lovely, Pili. Lovely words and a lovely picture to go with it. It's wonderful to see you back on here again. I hope you are feeling much better. Good luck in the contest! :) Sandra. xsx
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you Sandra , great comment. Hoping my motivation will comeback... But doing better. Xxx. Pili
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem is a nice expression of how our feelings and dreams eventually find their way into the greater cosmos of humanity and the spiritual realms. Nice.
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This poem is a nice expression of how our feelings and dreams eventually find their way into the greater cosmos of humanity and the spiritual realms. Nice.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Love your comment, thank you Bill. Pili
Comment from tbacha58
Oh Pili, I am so so happy to read your work. From my side, i do miss you when i don't read your poems. I feel you have so much to write about.
Pore your feelings on paper, as they say, do it. Your poem in 2 words has so much meanings. Good luck . Bless you Terry xoxoxo
That picture is so beautiful, and peaceful. xoxo
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Oh Pili, I am so so happy to read your work. From my side, i do miss you when i don't read your poems. I feel you have so much to write about.
Pore your feelings on paper, as they say, do it. Your poem in 2 words has so much meanings. Good luck . Bless you Terry xoxoxo
That picture is so beautiful, and peaceful. xoxo
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you my friend, will write when my muse awake. LOL.. Hope you are better. Hugs...
Comment from Glasstruth
They say we came from the ocean and spread onto the land. Water is life. Without it what is there? Our spirits is the big mystery that creates an endless amount of writing that tries to figure it out. Wonderfully written. Les
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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They say we came from the ocean and spread onto the land. Water is life. Without it what is there? Our spirits is the big mystery that creates an endless amount of writing that tries to figure it out. Wonderfully written. Les
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your terrific comment... Pili
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is so beautiful, pili, and i'm jealous that I didn't think of it first, lol. the picture and the words go hand in hand, it's a perfect example of a lune. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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this is so beautiful, pili, and i'm jealous that I didn't think of it first, lol. the picture and the words go hand in hand, it's a perfect example of a lune. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you sweet, great comment. Pili
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine Lune poem for the contest
The syllables are exact at 5-3-5
Strong imagery in the river songs and blue sea
Good connection of lines
a touch of alliteration
Very good reflective line
Excellent picture to match poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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This is a fine Lune poem for the contest
The syllables are exact at 5-3-5
Strong imagery in the river songs and blue sea
Good connection of lines
a touch of alliteration
Very good reflective line
Excellent picture to match poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I am so grateful for your meaningful comment. Pili
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Nicely done.
Short but rules of the contest followed and very good.
Topic was consistant and I loved the idea of our spirits following.
Light
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Nicely done.
Short but rules of the contest followed and very good.
Topic was consistant and I loved the idea of our spirits following.
Light
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Hi Barb ! Thank you so much... Pili
Comment from reconciled
Hello Tulip...-bigsmile- Ancient river sings
music spiritually
unfolds our souls song. ....missed you so much. love you Michael
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Hello Tulip...-bigsmile- Ancient river sings
music spiritually
unfolds our souls song. ....missed you so much. love you Michael
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Hi my soul friend, you busy bug...thank you baby, noni noni. Hugs...
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-smile- good to hear that again...noni noni...-smile-
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Comment from anabellapongasi
Hi Pili,
How are you, my friend?
This is a lovely entry to the lune poetry contest. I love the imagery of it. There's something about the river that makes one want to hear its enchanting stories.
ancient river songs
reach blue sea
our spirits follow
Beautiful! Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Hi Pili,
How are you, my friend?
This is a lovely entry to the lune poetry contest. I love the imagery of it. There's something about the river that makes one want to hear its enchanting stories.
ancient river songs
reach blue sea
our spirits follow
Beautiful! Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Hi my friend, not motivated this days ... Thank you for your great comment. Pili
Comment from AnnieDawn
You have written a good poem for the Lune contest and your picture compliments your poem especially with the rich blue tones in it. I like your nature choice. I have one suggestion though. Both "reach" and "song" are singular. If you add an "s" to "song" you will not be changing any of the syllables and still will be in compliance with the contest rules. Good job and good luck.
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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You have written a good poem for the Lune contest and your picture compliments your poem especially with the rich blue tones in it. I like your nature choice. I have one suggestion though. Both "reach" and "song" are singular. If you add an "s" to "song" you will not be changing any of the syllables and still will be in compliance with the contest rules. Good job and good luck.
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you so very much Annie.
