Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

We don't know what we have til it's gone

And you can say doggone it

This girl ain't coming back Jack. Why would she ...lying and stepping out.
That s WRONG . IM WITH HER 100% She has respect even if she doesn't have you.
God bles

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015

Glad yu enjoyed this little poem. Appreciate your comments and support always.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Brett...

_ I automatically thought on Lonestar's hit, 'She's Gone' when I read this. Love that song.
_ Poem has a country tune vibe in the making. (*<*)
_ Well penned.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015

Actually written as Country lyrics. Glad you enjoyed this little poem. Always appreciate your comments and support

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Very good. The picture goes with the work perfectly. The poem rhymes excellently. It is easy to read and understand. I can see nothing wrong with this piece. Good work

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 Comment Written 29-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015

Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your comments and support.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Associate the greyhound for the loss of your girl, because she left you on a greyhound. The only one blame is the lying one that takes the girl for granted. (Just my take on your poem) I might be wrong. A very good free verse though.

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 Comment Written 29-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. Always appreciate them very much indeed. And, yes, he is to blame, although he puts the blame on Greyhound.