Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Me And The Greyhound"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
44 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Another love gone wrong song. I think you do a very good job writing country music lyrics and love poems. It reminds me of the many times I used the train, since I don't own a car. Well done!
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Another love gone wrong song. I think you do a very good job writing country music lyrics and love poems. It reminds me of the many times I used the train, since I don't own a car. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Always appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from scd41
Waiting is a psychological torture. Be it in the bus stop for Greyhound or one's gal and that too in the bus stop. You have expressed your feelings very well. If the gal is not coming back by morning, who is going to take the blame first? Of course, Greyhound!
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Waiting is a psychological torture. Be it in the bus stop for Greyhound or one's gal and that too in the bus stop. You have expressed your feelings very well. If the gal is not coming back by morning, who is going to take the blame first? Of course, Greyhound!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Who else? Glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from GE Parson
Bret, you sure have a lot o girl friend problems!
I think if you took a shower more than once month and changed you underwear more than once a a week,you might be able to hold on to one of those gals you write about.
One of the funniest songs Roy Clark sings was about a Grey Hound bus taking his girl away "Thank God for Greyhound"
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Bret, you sure have a lot o girl friend problems!
I think if you took a shower more than once month and changed you underwear more than once a a week,you might be able to hold on to one of those gals you write about.
One of the funniest songs Roy Clark sings was about a Grey Hound bus taking his girl away "Thank God for Greyhound"
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Actually it is called "Thank God And Greyhound You're Gone". Glad you enjoyed my little lyric.
Comment from Janet Foor
A very creative love poem. I do understand misplaced anger and why not blame the Greyhound bus? At one time I was angry with JFK for years for something my husband did. Haha. Vivid imagery and an enjoyable read. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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A very creative love poem. I do understand misplaced anger and why not blame the Greyhound bus? At one time I was angry with JFK for years for something my husband did. Haha. Vivid imagery and an enjoyable read. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed my little Country lyric.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your Free Style love poem. It flows well with emotion and your artwork choice is great. It enhances your poem. Your last two paragraphs are sad, but I like them the best.
Angel123
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I enjoyed reading your Free Style love poem. It flows well with emotion and your artwork choice is great. It enhances your poem. Your last two paragraphs are sad, but I like them the best.
Angel123
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
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Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from LeannaP
Hi Brett,
I love the series of events
that the main character questions
in this read. I'm a big fan of the greyhound because
I used to take it for school a few years ago.
This poem has great cadence and
a solid rhythmic style.Nice work!
Leanna
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Hi Brett,
I love the series of events
that the main character questions
in this read. I'm a big fan of the greyhound because
I used to take it for school a few years ago.
This poem has great cadence and
a solid rhythmic style.Nice work!
Leanna
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed my little lyric.
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your welcome
Comment from Michelle Joy
This flowed so incredibly well. Not a single part of this poem was awkward or nonsensical, and the imagery you created was so vivid and wonderful. You did an amazing job writing this poem, well done.
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This flowed so incredibly well. Not a single part of this poem was awkward or nonsensical, and the imagery you created was so vivid and wonderful. You did an amazing job writing this poem, well done.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed my little lyric.
Comment from TPAC
Slammed this one. Finding all sorts of goodness to me captivating and thrilling in its read. I will confess certain line enhancements might make this effort excel in my opinion.
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Slammed this one. Finding all sorts of goodness to me captivating and thrilling in its read. I will confess certain line enhancements might make this effort excel in my opinion.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these Country lyrics. Your comments and support always welcome.
Comment from judiverse
I know you try a lot of different formats, but this is where you really shine. You go tell that bus what for! Great story line, one that country music lovers will go for. Excellent rhyme and flow with your AABB rhyme. You create a lot of atmosphere and feeling in the poem. Bus stations are not the ideal places to wait (the ones I know of, anyway). The buses are likely to be unpredictable about their schedules--kind of like the gal in the poem. Great work with this, and six stars while I have 'em. Happy trails. judi
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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I know you try a lot of different formats, but this is where you really shine. You go tell that bus what for! Great story line, one that country music lovers will go for. Excellent rhyme and flow with your AABB rhyme. You create a lot of atmosphere and feeling in the poem. Bus stations are not the ideal places to wait (the ones I know of, anyway). The buses are likely to be unpredictable about their schedules--kind of like the gal in the poem. Great work with this, and six stars while I have 'em. Happy trails. judi
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thanks, and see note.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from misscookie
I like the photo that you choose for your poem
Oh Lord can I relate it was 52 years ago
And till this day I have no regrets.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
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I like the photo that you choose for your poem
Oh Lord can I relate it was 52 years ago
And till this day I have no regrets.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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misscookie. Hopefully you are doing well these days! Glad you enjoyed this little poem of mine. Always appreciate your comments and support.
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God has been good to me, I'm doing well.
You're very welcome, it was my pleasure.
Have a blessed day.
Cookie
