Those Summer Walks
a quatern about friendship11 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful quatern poem, it has a great rhythm and perfect rhyme. The poem is sad but endearing. I really like the picture you used and the colors you chose. Good job!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Beautiful quatern poem, it has a great rhythm and perfect rhyme. The poem is sad but endearing. I really like the picture you used and the colors you chose. Good job!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for your very kind response to my poem.
Comment from Gloria ....
Well I gotta say, this quatern has adhered to the rules perfectly. I love the artwork, and the pastoral.
Living in a country like environment I really do enjoy the summer trails and summer walks.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Well I gotta say, this quatern has adhered to the rules perfectly. I love the artwork, and the pastoral.
Living in a country like environment I really do enjoy the summer trails and summer walks.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for joining me on this stroll. I have to drive quite a ways to find these trails now as the city keeps creeping outward.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nice quatern poem touting the pleasures of nature and friendship. Your poem is well composed and rhymed, tranquil and reminiscent. Marilyn/BeasPeas
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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This is a very nice quatern poem touting the pleasures of nature and friendship. Your poem is well composed and rhymed, tranquil and reminiscent. Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Thank you for sharing, Marilyn, and for your kind and thoughtful review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This quatern, Those Summer Walks, raises the idea of those summer walks to the shining time in one's life that it was. Communicating with another at the basic level, in the middle of a shared admiration for the greater natural world, seems like the pinnacle of what we can hope for as friends.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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This quatern, Those Summer Walks, raises the idea of those summer walks to the shining time in one's life that it was. Communicating with another at the basic level, in the middle of a shared admiration for the greater natural world, seems like the pinnacle of what we can hope for as friends.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Bill, I am so pleased you shared this poem and understand its intent so well. Thank you.
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a very well written Quatern poem, I love the repeating line it works so well in each stanza. The image is perfect for the whole poem, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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This is a very well written Quatern poem, I love the repeating line it works so well in each stanza. The image is perfect for the whole poem, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Mary,I am delighted you enjoyed the quatern and think the refrain works well. Thank you for your kind feedback and encouragement.
Comment from muezza56
I really enjoyed reading this really well written poem, a walk down memory lane with a beloved and missed old friend, who has been brought back to life by this poem. well chosen accompanying pic, completes the imagery
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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I really enjoyed reading this really well written poem, a walk down memory lane with a beloved and missed old friend, who has been brought back to life by this poem. well chosen accompanying pic, completes the imagery
Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Thanks for strolling with me, muezza56. Indeed, just writing the poem brought back fond memories.
Comment from Nikki141012
This was really good. And well written. Its emotionally and happy. Made me think a lot.
I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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This was really good. And well written. Its emotionally and happy. Made me think a lot.
I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Nikki, there is nothing I like better than to know my poem could make a reader "think a lot." Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a very lovely Quatrain poem. AI like your choise of the repeat line. Yout meter is flawless and your rhyme excellent. The picture was a great choice for the poem. Well done Author. Good luck. Nancy
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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This is a very lovely Quatrain poem. AI like your choise of the repeat line. Yout meter is flawless and your rhyme excellent. The picture was a great choice for the poem. Well done Author. Good luck. Nancy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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So pleased you enjoyed this one, Nancy. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment from Jose Saic
Some body said that remembering is to live again. In this beautiful poem the poet express the recall of wonderful summer walks with a friend. Relations with nature between them was important because as good friends they spent that moments talking and sharing their love to nature.
Congratulations.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Some body said that remembering is to live again. In this beautiful poem the poet express the recall of wonderful summer walks with a friend. Relations with nature between them was important because as good friends they spent that moments talking and sharing their love to nature.
Congratulations.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Thank you for sharing my nostalgic stroll and for understanding exactly why I wrote this poem.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Glenn Paul
This reminds me of a book my daughter-in-law gave me. It has a sweet reverie to it.
I'm not sure I understand "old friend" because I have no reference to your own age but this is a minor thing in the whole.
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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This reminds me of a book my daughter-in-law gave me. It has a sweet reverie to it.
I'm not sure I understand "old friend" because I have no reference to your own age but this is a minor thing in the whole.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Thank you for sharing my poem. Yes, I do strive for a nostalgic tone in my poetry and "old friend" is to be taken literally two ways: as one who IS old and as one who has been my friend a long time.
