Acrostic - Robert W. Service
An Acrostic Poetry Contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from damommy
I really enjoyed this. Robert Service is one of my favorites. I have all his works. I love that his poetry was so simple, yet full of story.
This is a lovely tribute to Robert Service.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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I really enjoyed this. Robert Service is one of my favorites. I have all his works. I love that his poetry was so simple, yet full of story.
This is a lovely tribute to Robert Service.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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Hi damommy,
Service is one of my absolute favorites. I grew up here in Alaska, so he just feels 'local' to us with all of the gold rush and Yukon poetry. He's been a favorite of mine since I was a kid. In 6th grade I had a teacher that would read his poems to us and do the accents, too. Got me hooked!!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kim
Comment from TPAC
Tingling to read this work illustrates descriptive line structuring and pleasing conveyances in a interesting write. I found this read warming in its presentation.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Tingling to read this work illustrates descriptive line structuring and pleasing conveyances in a interesting write. I found this read warming in its presentation.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you for a lovely review, TPAC. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This author acrostic about Service reminded me of my father. This was his favorite poet and The Cremation of Sam McGee was his favorite poem. He knew it and Longfellow's Song of Hiawatha by heart.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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This author acrostic about Service reminded me of my father. This was his favorite poet and The Cremation of Sam McGee was his favorite poem. He knew it and Longfellow's Song of Hiawatha by heart.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I am happy to have brought you memories when you read my poem, Bill. That is testimony in itself. Thank you for sharing that moment and this kind review.
Comment from angel123
Your poem about poet, Robert W. Service is interesting and entertaining. I never heard of him, so thank you for sharing. It sounds like he is a western written. Your poem flows and rhymes well and I think the artwork goes well with your it.
Angel123
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Your poem about poet, Robert W. Service is interesting and entertaining. I never heard of him, so thank you for sharing. It sounds like he is a western written. Your poem flows and rhymes well and I think the artwork goes well with your it.
Angel123
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Hi angel. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Robert W. Service was a poet. I would highly recommend that you check out some of his selections: The Cremation of Sam McGee, The Shooting of Dan McGrew, The Spell of the Yukon, and for a particular laugh, Bessie's Boil. I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from bard owl
You did an excellent job of capturing the ambiance of the great state of Alaska in your tribute to Service. The imagery is very clear and the rhythm and rhyme flawless. Best of luck in the contest with this fine write.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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You did an excellent job of capturing the ambiance of the great state of Alaska in your tribute to Service. The imagery is very clear and the rhythm and rhyme flawless. Best of luck in the contest with this fine write.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for this delightful review, bard owl.
Comment from Clockwise
This acrostic is expertly crafted with careful attention to rhyme and rhythm. It deserves to win the contest, and more than deserves six stars. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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This acrostic is expertly crafted with careful attention to rhyme and rhythm. It deserves to win the contest, and more than deserves six stars. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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I am so flattered by this exceptional review, Clockwise. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment.
Comment from Glenn Paul
Very earthy. I like how you developed the character of the ones who toiled in the wilderness land and the bleak existence for the women who ventured there. The contrast of the newcomers was a fresh perspective. It seemed short to me. I wanted to hear more about their impressions of the land itself but perhaps the format limited that.
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Very earthy. I like how you developed the character of the ones who toiled in the wilderness land and the bleak existence for the women who ventured there. The contrast of the newcomers was a fresh perspective. It seemed short to me. I wanted to hear more about their impressions of the land itself but perhaps the format limited that.
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Hi Glenn... this was an Acrostic, which, of course, spelled out Robert W. Service. Thus, I used the maximum number of lines to accommodate. If you are familiar with Robert W. Service, it was written in his style, as a tribute to him and his poetic legacy. If you haven't ever read him, I totally recommend that you read the following titles: The Cremation of Sam McGee, The Shooting of Dan McGrew, The Spell of the Yukon, and for a good laugh, Bessie's Boil. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from sbedian
I think this poem is very beautiful. It really seems to capture the essence of Alaskan starlight and the legendary northern lights. The lines "Erstwhile...replies" I loved the most, and the use of language seemed very intelligent and poetic. I really liked this one!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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I think this poem is very beautiful. It really seems to capture the essence of Alaskan starlight and the legendary northern lights. The lines "Erstwhile...replies" I loved the most, and the use of language seemed very intelligent and poetic. I really liked this one!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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I am truly flattered by your six star rating and kind review. Robert Service is one of my favorite poets and I wanted to reflect his style in this tribute. I would highly recommend the following selections: The Cremation of Sam McGee, The Shooting of Dan McGrew, The Spell of the Yukon, The Ballad of The Wage Slave, and for a good laugh, Bessie's Boil. Thank you so much.
Comment from Gone but not forgotten
Thanks for the clarifying glossary. I enjoyed this poem and was able to immerse myself in the Alaska of the gold-rush days (or is it still like this??!) One tiny thing I might have done differently is to use... 'neath Northern lights...rather than beneath, but that's just because I like how it sounds. Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Thanks for the clarifying glossary. I enjoyed this poem and was able to immerse myself in the Alaska of the gold-rush days (or is it still like this??!) One tiny thing I might have done differently is to use... 'neath Northern lights...rather than beneath, but that's just because I like how it sounds. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Hi! Thank you so much for your kind words. You know, I started out with 'neath, but changed it. Alaska still has areas where you find the gold rush spirit and final frontier attitude, but there are areas for those wanting all the amenities, as well. Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from Eric1
Hi mystery author, This is a really good entry for this particular competition, I must admit I have never heard of Robert W Service but I am sure your wonderfully rhymed poem does him justice. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Hi mystery author, This is a really good entry for this particular competition, I must admit I have never heard of Robert W Service but I am sure your wonderfully rhymed poem does him justice. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Hi, Eric! Thank you for your kind review. If you would like to check out Robert W. Service, I'll make some recommendations. Try The Cremation of Sam McGee, The Shooting of Dan McGrew, The Spell of the Yukon, and for a particular laugh, Bessie's Boil. Enjoy! :)
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I certainly will my friend.
