Act of Endurance
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a high concern of the fate of the Americans today, human greed is such one could say America eats its young; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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This speaks a high concern of the fate of the Americans today, human greed is such one could say America eats its young; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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A shame when those towers fell in NYC, enjoyed prior their distant site from my living room window. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Katya
Oh, I like this one! It's like reading a mosaic rendition of "Guernica", Picasso's famous painting based on the Nazi's bombing of the village of that name. The surface sends you in all directions, the underlying picture has all sorts of broken shapes and images, but still it is clear.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Oh, I like this one! It's like reading a mosaic rendition of "Guernica", Picasso's famous painting based on the Nazi's bombing of the village of that name. The surface sends you in all directions, the underlying picture has all sorts of broken shapes and images, but still it is clear.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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An interesting comment about this write, glad aspects presented were touching to you. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Shelli 1
Very picturesque and moving poem I can just imagine people working in the majestic blogs making a difference for all of us
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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Very picturesque and moving poem I can just imagine people working in the majestic blogs making a difference for all of us
Comment Written 06-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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I watched those towers before 9/11, the day they fell I was returning from step fathers' funeral. A double fold of emotions for me. Thanking you for generous rate and touching sentiments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
The twin towers tower above all other buildings. They have many functions to protect the country as well as serving as a shopping centre.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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The twin towers tower above all other buildings. They have many functions to protect the country as well as serving as a shopping centre.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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Lot of action inside those giants structures. The many lives held in their bodies with their purpose in hopes of advancements for us. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating conveyances.
Comment from Nosha17
I guess you mean the twin towers of New York, I have been to the top before that fateful day. They were a whole world unto themselves, so many people's lives affected before and after. Excellent sentiment and well chosen words. Faye
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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I guess you mean the twin towers of New York, I have been to the top before that fateful day. They were a whole world unto themselves, so many people's lives affected before and after. Excellent sentiment and well chosen words. Faye
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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Yeah. Very event filled day for me buring my step father and then the planes. Thanking you for generous rate and thoughts.
Comment from papa55mike
Good descriptive poem. It's amazing the structures mankind can build.
I love the "structured temples of retail" line.
Have a great weekend and God bless, mike
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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Good descriptive poem. It's amazing the structures mankind can build.
I love the "structured temples of retail" line.
Have a great weekend and God bless, mike
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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Glad work touched you. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating thoughts.
