Age becomes me.
I'm content.120 total reviews
Comment from bhogg
Wonderful message and thoughts, written in a rhyme scheme that moved me quickly through. All of us have ups and downs, but you're right about love. In the end, it comes closer to defining success. Bill
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Wonderful message and thoughts, written in a rhyme scheme that moved me quickly through. All of us have ups and downs, but you're right about love. In the end, it comes closer to defining success. Bill
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much , I'm cutting and pasting, sorry for taking so long to reply, been away for a week, but thank you for the kind review and dropping, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from summers.243
Favorite diction moments:
litheness , turbid.
The concept of love being the only thing in which makes us whole is so true. Appreciate and respect the biblical references, "to gain the whole world yet lose one's soul".
The rhythm was good, but made the endings predictable to me. Hard to avoid when the rhyming is so structured, could be just me.
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Favorite diction moments:
litheness , turbid.
The concept of love being the only thing in which makes us whole is so true. Appreciate and respect the biblical references, "to gain the whole world yet lose one's soul".
The rhythm was good, but made the endings predictable to me. Hard to avoid when the rhyming is so structured, could be just me.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
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Thanks, Roy.
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to your poem
and the message is so heartfelt any to relate to.
This is what I call a food for thought poem meaning after you red it you go mm
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I love the words to your poem
and the message is so heartfelt any to relate to.
This is what I call a food for thought poem meaning after you red it you go mm
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much much Cookie, for the wonderful review, and kind words, and exceptional rating, sorry for being late, away for a week, blessings, Roy.
You're very welcome, it was my pleasure.
Have a blessed day.
Cookie
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You too Cookie
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Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from scongrove
This is one of my favorites Roy. Your words have so much meaning and come from the heart. Your truly such a gifted person that can express words in a way that gives us all a heartfelt message. Thank you for sharing another master piece.
Shana :)
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This is one of my favorites Roy. Your words have so much meaning and come from the heart. Your truly such a gifted person that can express words in a way that gives us all a heartfelt message. Thank you for sharing another master piece.
Shana :)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Shana, for the wonderful review, and kind words, and exceptional rating, sorry for being late, been away for a week, blessings, Roy.
Comment from robina1978
Nice title, that will attract people. You are content, as is your soul. When young you had so many dreams. One by one they stalled. But at the end it is only love that makes one whole. Nice rhyme and flow.
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Nice title, that will attract people. You are content, as is your soul. When young you had so many dreams. One by one they stalled. But at the end it is only love that makes one whole. Nice rhyme and flow.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much, I'm cutting and pasting, sorry for taking so long to reply, been away for a week, but thank you for the kind review and dropping, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is wonderful. Enjoyed it completely and I guess age becomes me, too. Your poem is filled with contentment, gratitude, and appreciation of a journey. These are my favorite lines:
"Celestial river, so deep the flow,
It feeds my soul my spirit's glow,
This fire within cannot be quenched,
Nor feet be moved, from God be wrenched."
Marilyn/BeasPeas
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This is wonderful. Enjoyed it completely and I guess age becomes me, too. Your poem is filled with contentment, gratitude, and appreciation of a journey. These are my favorite lines:
"Celestial river, so deep the flow,
It feeds my soul my spirit's glow,
This fire within cannot be quenched,
Nor feet be moved, from God be wrenched."
Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Marilyn, , for the wonderful review, and kind words, and exceptional rating, sorry for being late, been away for a week, blessings, Roy.
Comment from JustJenny12345
This is lovely. It's nice to see people not hating the fact they're getting older -- so much of trying to defy age going on in this world just, it drives me nuts... be glad you got to get 'older', it's better than the alternative! Beautiful that love is your dream that was realised. Who cares about all the other nonsense when all is said and done.
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This is lovely. It's nice to see people not hating the fact they're getting older -- so much of trying to defy age going on in this world just, it drives me nuts... be glad you got to get 'older', it's better than the alternative! Beautiful that love is your dream that was realised. Who cares about all the other nonsense when all is said and done.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much, I'm cutting and pasting, sorry for taking so long to reply, been away for a week, but thank you for the kind review and dropping, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Chellybelle
This is so sweet. I love rhyming poems, I find they flow so easily and are a lot less vague. I really enjoyed this. Keep it up.
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This is so sweet. I love rhyming poems, I find they flow so easily and are a lot less vague. I really enjoyed this. Keep it up.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much, for the wonderful review, and kind words, and exceptional rating, sorry for being late, been away for a week, blessings, Roy.
Comment from dragonpoet
This flowing quatrain poem tells of what you learn in life as dreams change or don't come true. That faith and inner peace are more important than any material item.
That love in our lives is more important than money.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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This flowing quatrain poem tells of what you learn in life as dreams change or don't come true. That faith and inner peace are more important than any material item.
That love in our lives is more important than money.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Joan, I'm cutting and pasting, sorry for taking so long to reply, been away for a week, but thank you for the kind review and dropping, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
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No problem, Roy. Hope you had fun whereever you went.
Joan
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Thanks Joan I did.
Comment from Michaelk
Contentment is a powerful thing. It allows you to be and do what you want without reservation.
This poem was beautifully written, straightforward yet simply elegant. It all boils down to, 'I know who I am and why I'm here, why would I do anything else?'
An excellent moral.
An excellent poem.
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Contentment is a powerful thing. It allows you to be and do what you want without reservation.
This poem was beautifully written, straightforward yet simply elegant. It all boils down to, 'I know who I am and why I'm here, why would I do anything else?'
An excellent moral.
An excellent poem.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Mike, I'm cutting and pasting, sorry for taking so long to reply, been away for a week, but thank you for the kind review and dropping, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
