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Quatern poem contest.11 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Well written quatern poem with excellent content. I do feel we must "act as if" and project positivity. It's important to enjoy every day that we have.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Well written quatern poem with excellent content. I do feel we must "act as if" and project positivity. It's important to enjoy every day that we have.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your fine review.
Comment from Chrissy710
What a fabulous poem don't have a 6 but this deserves one. Lovely words well written and should do very well Good luck Cheers Christineð???
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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What a fabulous poem don't have a 6 but this deserves one. Lovely words well written and should do very well Good luck Cheers Christineð???
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thanks Chrissy for your excellent review and virtual six much appreciated.
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Well deserved
Comment from Gloria ....
Take the focus of self and dare to share - I think you might mean to take the focus off self there? Not entirely sure, but just in case. LOL.
Excellent quatern and the sentiment is such great advice for us all. It's so easy to become self-absorbed and spend one's entire life looking inward.
Best wishes to you in the contest. Your presentation of poetry is excellent.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Take the focus of self and dare to share - I think you might mean to take the focus off self there? Not entirely sure, but just in case. LOL.
Excellent quatern and the sentiment is such great advice for us all. It's so easy to become self-absorbed and spend one's entire life looking inward.
Best wishes to you in the contest. Your presentation of poetry is excellent.
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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thanks Gloria for your excellent review.
Comment from Joan E.
What a beautiful artwork and quote you selected to adorn your Quatern! I admired the way the message cascaded through your poem and you shared your wisdom with us. I was captivated by "The cosmic dust, science taught us to trace" and your "river" metaphor. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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What a beautiful artwork and quote you selected to adorn your Quatern! I admired the way the message cascaded through your poem and you shared your wisdom with us. I was captivated by "The cosmic dust, science taught us to trace" and your "river" metaphor. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Thanks Joan for your excellent review and comments.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully composed Quatern entry in this contest. I really love the simple presentation of poetic art, no metaphorical mystery, but plainly written in elegant, easily interpreted language. A message of onward and upward, of life spent in the progressive lane. Nicely scribed in fluid, even terms, in aabb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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A beautifully composed Quatern entry in this contest. I really love the simple presentation of poetic art, no metaphorical mystery, but plainly written in elegant, easily interpreted language. A message of onward and upward, of life spent in the progressive lane. Nicely scribed in fluid, even terms, in aabb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Thanks Roy for the great comments in your excellent review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Quatern poem contest.
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Excellent entry for the quatern poem contest. Your poem flows so well and the rhyme is perfect. I think I know who this is. :) Well done and I love the picture.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Quatern poem contest.
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Excellent entry for the quatern poem contest. Your poem flows so well and the rhyme is perfect. I think I know who this is. :) Well done and I love the picture.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Thank You Gypsy for your excellent review.
Comment from TAB_that's me
from what I understand of the form and the contest, each line has to have 8 syllables and yours does not - first line has 9, second and third have 10 each - I didn't count after that.
If you change it let me and I will change your rating.
Teresa
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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from what I understand of the form and the contest, each line has to have 8 syllables and yours does not - first line has 9, second and third have 10 each - I didn't count after that.
If you change it let me and I will change your rating.
Teresa
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Thanks Teresa for your informative review, I made a mistake of not reading the rules of the poem properly, so I will just leave it.
Comment from Tessa Kay
Very nice poem with a very wise message. Your repeated line is very thought-provoking, showing we're in control of how we present ourselves, not just victims
of our surroundings. Well thought out and well presented.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Very nice poem with a very wise message. Your repeated line is very thought-provoking, showing we're in control of how we present ourselves, not just victims
of our surroundings. Well thought out and well presented.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Thanks Tessa for your excellent review.
Comment from dmt1967
I like the repeated line, 'choose the message you're sending out there.' If we all send the message of love, the world would be filled with love and not hate. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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I like the repeated line, 'choose the message you're sending out there.' If we all send the message of love, the world would be filled with love and not hate. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Thank you. I needed this reminder. Lately, I have been stressing too much and giving thanks too less. Best to you with the entry in this contest.
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Thank you. I needed this reminder. Lately, I have been stressing too much and giving thanks too less. Best to you with the entry in this contest.
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Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Thanks Jean for your encouraging review.
