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Comment from robina1978
An excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. Nice alliteration in the name of the woman. I suppose it is fictional, or not. It rhymes all the way and tells an intriguing story.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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An excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. Nice alliteration in the name of the woman. I suppose it is fictional, or not. It rhymes all the way and tells an intriguing story.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Ine, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Jay Squires
You have a distinct way, Bill of composing a poem that makes the reader smile, chuckle, giggle or chortle ... until he casts his mind back to the lines and sees there's more than humor there. There is usually a pathos that borders on the tragic.
This is one of those.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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You have a distinct way, Bill of composing a poem that makes the reader smile, chuckle, giggle or chortle ... until he casts his mind back to the lines and sees there's more than humor there. There is usually a pathos that borders on the tragic.
This is one of those.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Jay, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ha-ha...talk about going to pieces over a situation, old Wendy Wong took it a bit to the extreme, wouldn't you agree, heh-heh? If she'd been servicing Marines it probably never would have happened. We had Seabees checking for landmines for us, LOL.
Oh well...live, and learn.
~Dean
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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Ha-ha...talk about going to pieces over a situation, old Wendy Wong took it a bit to the extreme, wouldn't you agree, heh-heh? If she'd been servicing Marines it probably never would have happened. We had Seabees checking for landmines for us, LOL.
Oh well...live, and learn.
~Dean
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Dean, for the amusing and informative review. Bill
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You're welcome.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This has a terrible ending for poor Wendy. Nice humorous approach though to a sensitive subject. Good alliteration in the name.
Teresa
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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This has a terrible ending for poor Wendy. Nice humorous approach though to a sensitive subject. Good alliteration in the name.
Teresa
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Teresa, for reviewing. Bill
Comment from Nosha17
I wasn't sure if you are being serious or is this in jest? I don't know much about the Vietnam war, so I am not sure of the message-I don't mean to be disrespectful. Good use of rhyme, did you mean fractious in the last line? Faye
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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I wasn't sure if you are being serious or is this in jest? I don't know much about the Vietnam war, so I am not sure of the message-I don't mean to be disrespectful. Good use of rhyme, did you mean fractious in the last line? Faye
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Faye, for reviewing. Just an playful use of the word to meet the rhyme scheme.
