Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Daisy - the epilogue"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congratulations. You have a well written book and this chapter was no exception. It easily held my interest. The dialogue is strong. I love the way they interacted at the end of this chapter and you ended it on a real positive. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Congratulations. You have a well written book and this chapter was no exception. It easily held my interest. The dialogue is strong. I love the way they interacted at the end of this chapter and you ended it on a real positive. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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You're very kind, thank you
Comment from Adri7enne
Good final chapter, Snod. So Whitmarsh ends up 'stroked' by the fairies. That'll teach him! Good enough for him.
Shades is going to be working days now. Ess will soon have him towing the line. LOL! Good thing he's cute.
Congratulations on finishing another one, Snod. These should all be published. Good luck with it.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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Good final chapter, Snod. So Whitmarsh ends up 'stroked' by the fairies. That'll teach him! Good enough for him.
Shades is going to be working days now. Ess will soon have him towing the line. LOL! Good thing he's cute.
Congratulations on finishing another one, Snod. These should all be published. Good luck with it.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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Thanks, but I think this one needs a lot of polishing. there are some plot lines and characters that need sorting out more thoroughly. Glad you liked it
