Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Chapter Diecinueve, (19) Part Dos"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
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Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHA - I laughed out loud from, "You know him don't you?...right through to when the three of them laughed. As I told you the last time, Kuruk (grandfather) is my favourite character, and that scene was so realistic and typical!!!
What a great chapter again. I'm behind, so I'll rush on to read the next one.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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HAHAHAHA - I laughed out loud from, "You know him don't you?...right through to when the three of them laughed. As I told you the last time, Kuruk (grandfather) is my favourite character, and that scene was so realistic and typical!!!
What a great chapter again. I'm behind, so I'll rush on to read the next one.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Minglewoods
I have not read the previous chapters, but this seems interesting, easy to read and flowed well.
I'm from the North East and Lyme Disease is very common so I'll give you a tip. This prescription of IV anti-biotics for fourteen to twenty-eight days, is extreme. I mean really extreme, and I'll tell you why. If you can see the bulls eye rash, that means he just got it. It doesn't even show up in the blood stream for two to three weeks, so that bruise would have to be fading. It can cause those kind of symptoms, rapid hear beat, but only after it has gone undetected for about a year or more. It is far more likely for him to start getting joint-pain at this point, like his knees just going out on him for no reason. And he may be treated with an IV, that day but he would go home with mega doses of anti-biotics for the month. The main thing is, they would never give him an IV for two weeks to a month. They just don't keep you in the hospital that long.
I and my husband have both had it. The worse case I've seen was my best friend's son. At the age of nine, he just sat down half way up the stairs and said he couldn't go any further. Extreme Exhaustion. That was after about a year of not being diagnosed. Even then they just gave him anti-biotics in a pill form.
Hope this is helpful and good luck with school next week. : ) I too start back but isn't it glorious to have the summers off?
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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I have not read the previous chapters, but this seems interesting, easy to read and flowed well.
I'm from the North East and Lyme Disease is very common so I'll give you a tip. This prescription of IV anti-biotics for fourteen to twenty-eight days, is extreme. I mean really extreme, and I'll tell you why. If you can see the bulls eye rash, that means he just got it. It doesn't even show up in the blood stream for two to three weeks, so that bruise would have to be fading. It can cause those kind of symptoms, rapid hear beat, but only after it has gone undetected for about a year or more. It is far more likely for him to start getting joint-pain at this point, like his knees just going out on him for no reason. And he may be treated with an IV, that day but he would go home with mega doses of anti-biotics for the month. The main thing is, they would never give him an IV for two weeks to a month. They just don't keep you in the hospital that long.
I and my husband have both had it. The worse case I've seen was my best friend's son. At the age of nine, he just sat down half way up the stairs and said he couldn't go any further. Extreme Exhaustion. That was after about a year of not being diagnosed. Even then they just gave him anti-biotics in a pill form.
Hope this is helpful and good luck with school next week. : ) I too start back but isn't it glorious to have the summers off?
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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I just went with the research because his Lyme disease was advanced. Thank you for the help.
Comment from DOMINA ALEXANDRA
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Felt it compellng to read and wished for more. I can not wait to read more of your work. Thanks for an amazing chapter
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Felt it compellng to read and wished for more. I can not wait to read more of your work. Thanks for an amazing chapter
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from abbasjoy
What is that Miguel Sanchez up to now? I can't believe he had the nerve to show up at the hospital.
Jim's right about not leaving Soni alone with and Miguel.
And what of Kuruk with this strange disease? All kinds of things are happening to him. Wonder where he contracted that Lyme Disease?
Another interesting chapter leaving us guessing what Miguel is up to.
Frankly, I think it's time they put him away, he's a born trouble maker.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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What is that Miguel Sanchez up to now? I can't believe he had the nerve to show up at the hospital.
Jim's right about not leaving Soni alone with and Miguel.
And what of Kuruk with this strange disease? All kinds of things are happening to him. Wonder where he contracted that Lyme Disease?
Another interesting chapter leaving us guessing what Miguel is up to.
Frankly, I think it's time they put him away, he's a born trouble maker.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Sefiros
Dammit. Miguel comes into the picture? And he says he just saw Kurik? I can understand Jim's concern. There's the chance he did Kurik harm, and the chance he wouldn't be friendly to Soni. Good cliff-hanger. It kinda makes everything came came before Miguel moot, but its a good way to end the chapter. Nice job.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Dammit. Miguel comes into the picture? And he says he just saw Kurik? I can understand Jim's concern. There's the chance he did Kurik harm, and the chance he wouldn't be friendly to Soni. Good cliff-hanger. It kinda makes everything came came before Miguel moot, but its a good way to end the chapter. Nice job.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi Barbara, I enjoyed the format of your story which made the flow run well. I'm wondering why Jim doesn't want to leave Soni alone with Miguel. Guess, I'll have to read the book. I liked how you establish that the story takes place in Texas right on the I-35. That's neat. I think the premise for the book will be a hit. Take care and cheers.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Hi Barbara, I enjoyed the format of your story which made the flow run well. I'm wondering why Jim doesn't want to leave Soni alone with Miguel. Guess, I'll have to read the book. I liked how you establish that the story takes place in Texas right on the I-35. That's neat. I think the premise for the book will be a hit. Take care and cheers.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Ulla
The story is taking off to a new height, what with Miguel appearing on the scene and I believe not with the best of intention. I hope he hasn't harmed Kuruk. We'll see. A good read which I enjoyed. Ulla
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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The story is taking off to a new height, what with Miguel appearing on the scene and I believe not with the best of intention. I hope he hasn't harmed Kuruk. We'll see. A good read which I enjoyed. Ulla
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
5th last line: Miguel stepped from room.?
I'm still enjoying the story, especially the finer points of the romance, like Jim noticing Soni's hair. The hospital scenes are very realistic, Giddy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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5th last line: Miguel stepped from room.?
I'm still enjoying the story, especially the finer points of the romance, like Jim noticing Soni's hair. The hospital scenes are very realistic, Giddy
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I need to fix that last line.
Comment from Jackreese
This was a very good and interesting chapter. I thought that your descriptive words helped to clarify your imagery. I liked the characters in this chapter. I think I need to read more! Great job!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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This was a very good and interesting chapter. I thought that your descriptive words helped to clarify your imagery. I liked the characters in this chapter. I think I need to read more! Great job!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from rmj09
The focus is the presents of Miguel Sanchez. The storyline development Jim stops to tell Soni what Kuruk's diagnosis is. He has Lyme Disease very rare in Texas. That he'll have to be on IV antibiotic's. Soni says he wouldn't take them but Jim says he agrees to take it plus his herbs. As Jim and Soni head to Kuruk's room they see Miguel Sanchez coming from his room. He tells Soni that he had come to see Kuruk and Soni. Jim starts to enter the room but refuses to leave Soni with Miguel.
The hook has Miguel killed Kuruk and Soni is next?
The dialog show the continual development of the characters. The narration shows action Miguel reaching into his pocket, for what one of Kuruk's knifes.
The emotion felt distrust of Miguel who may have killed the men on El Capiton.
Keep on writing.
Barbara, have a great week and weekend.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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The focus is the presents of Miguel Sanchez. The storyline development Jim stops to tell Soni what Kuruk's diagnosis is. He has Lyme Disease very rare in Texas. That he'll have to be on IV antibiotic's. Soni says he wouldn't take them but Jim says he agrees to take it plus his herbs. As Jim and Soni head to Kuruk's room they see Miguel Sanchez coming from his room. He tells Soni that he had come to see Kuruk and Soni. Jim starts to enter the room but refuses to leave Soni with Miguel.
The hook has Miguel killed Kuruk and Soni is next?
The dialog show the continual development of the characters. The narration shows action Miguel reaching into his pocket, for what one of Kuruk's knifes.
The emotion felt distrust of Miguel who may have killed the men on El Capiton.
Keep on writing.
Barbara, have a great week and weekend.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
