Everyday Riches
a rhymed & metered poem27 total reviews
Comment from hannahorion
This poem takes the reader for a ride through the country across the changing seasons. The poem harbors an appreciation for life and for Gods creation and presents each image for the readers enjoyment. It serves to remind us that the whole creation is there to be noticed and appreciated and not taken for granted. I gave this work five stars.
  |
This poem takes the reader for a ride through the country across the changing seasons. The poem harbors an appreciation for life and for Gods creation and presents each image for the readers enjoyment. It serves to remind us that the whole creation is there to be noticed and appreciated and not taken for granted. I gave this work five stars.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
Comment from rjuselius
This is an excellent piece of spiritual poetry dear dawn! It brings about the joys of life under the watchful eye of our creator. Very well executed! The imagery is truly delightful.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Virtual six..
Rebekka x
|
This is an excellent piece of spiritual poetry dear dawn! It brings about the joys of life under the watchful eye of our creator. Very well executed! The imagery is truly delightful.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Virtual six..
Rebekka x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
Comment from Dean Kuch
What can I say to this romantic, well rhymed, beautifully presented, breathtaking poem but "Bravo!", Dawn? I could go into all of the specific technical aspects that make this s-o-o-o-o-o-o very good, but why bother? You already know.
You wrote it after all, LOL.
Seriously, this is exceptional work, Dawn, and one of your very best I feel.
Here's a sixer for ya'.
~Dean :)
 |
What can I say to this romantic, well rhymed, beautifully presented, breathtaking poem but "Bravo!", Dawn? I could go into all of the specific technical aspects that make this s-o-o-o-o-o-o very good, but why bother? You already know.
You wrote it after all, LOL.
Seriously, this is exceptional work, Dawn, and one of your very best I feel.
Here's a sixer for ya'.
~Dean :)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
Comment from BeasPeas
Your poem is well expressed with excellent rhyme. It shows appreciation for God's positive gifts and those of us who live in faith. The most meaningful lines for me are:
"But life is so rich with the blessings of God -"
AND
"God knows what I need and He always provides."
Marilyn
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
Your poem is well expressed with excellent rhyme. It shows appreciation for God's positive gifts and those of us who live in faith. The most meaningful lines for me are:
"But life is so rich with the blessings of God -"
AND
"God knows what I need and He always provides."
Marilyn
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
What a beautiful poem. All the riches of the world can't buy the wonderful things you describe. The rich often goes on holiday to the most beautiful places but they never experience a beautiful sunrise because they want to sleep late. Also missing the awesome sunset because they have to prepare for tonight's dinner and party.
|
What a beautiful poem. All the riches of the world can't buy the wonderful things you describe. The rich often goes on holiday to the most beautiful places but they never experience a beautiful sunrise because they want to sleep late. Also missing the awesome sunset because they have to prepare for tonight's dinner and party.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
Comment from dragonpoet
Your word supply the images, sounds and emotions of nature. It's beauty can astound and calm.
The poems rhymes are unforced and it has a smooth meter to it like living with and accepting all the God has given you.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
Your word supply the images, sounds and emotions of nature. It's beauty can astound and calm.
The poems rhymes are unforced and it has a smooth meter to it like living with and accepting all the God has given you.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
Comment from dmt1967
This is a great poem my friend. I enjoyed reading it very much. I loved the rich blue background and the glamorous cat lady. Far better than the old hag in the Sampson's lol. Thank you for sharing my friend and I hope you are doing well.
|
This is a great poem my friend. I enjoyed reading it very much. I loved the rich blue background and the glamorous cat lady. Far better than the old hag in the Sampson's lol. Thank you for sharing my friend and I hope you are doing well.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
