Everyday Riches
a rhymed & metered poem27 total reviews
Comment from DALLAS01
This was an uplifting poem sprinkled with al kinds of goodies: Fantastic imagery
alliteration. A nice cadence and flowing rhyme. It was a feel-good read. Where did you find the animated artwork? And how did you download it?
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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This was an uplifting poem sprinkled with al kinds of goodies: Fantastic imagery
alliteration. A nice cadence and flowing rhyme. It was a feel-good read. Where did you find the animated artwork? And how did you download it?
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much. I'm keeping my replies short to try and catch up a little. My apologies.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a lovely poem, Dawn. I especially like the first stanza:
Perhaps I'm not wealthy; let's face it - I'm broke.
I've several aches; a most strangling yoke.
But life is so rich with the blessings of God -
His miracles daily - in Him I'm so awed!
Your imagery is strong in this. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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This is a lovely poem, Dawn. I especially like the first stanza:
Perhaps I'm not wealthy; let's face it - I'm broke.
I've several aches; a most strangling yoke.
But life is so rich with the blessings of God -
His miracles daily - in Him I'm so awed!
Your imagery is strong in this. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much, Debbie - what a kind and generous review! You take care too, my friend. :)
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Dawn. Crikey mate I'm out of sixes mate. This is a masterpiece my friend and I loved everything about it because everything in it means so much to me. Nature and God, what more can I say dear friend but Bravo! Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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G'day Dawn. Crikey mate I'm out of sixes mate. This is a masterpiece my friend and I loved everything about it because everything in it means so much to me. Nature and God, what more can I say dear friend but Bravo! Cheers Fez
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Wow, Fez, your wonderful comments mean more than any six could - thank you - I'm deeply honoured. :)
Comment from happykat4
LOVED the WHOLE POEM! This was an enjoyable read from beginning to end. Loved the part about the cat...and the neighbors. They need to SMILE. You have a wonderful gift. I thought the last line of this poem is so very true, God did such a wonderful job when He made this earth and everything on it. Kat :)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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LOVED the WHOLE POEM! This was an enjoyable read from beginning to end. Loved the part about the cat...and the neighbors. They need to SMILE. You have a wonderful gift. I thought the last line of this poem is so very true, God did such a wonderful job when He made this earth and everything on it. Kat :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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WOW. What an amazing review! I am completely humbled. Thank you!!! (And how in the world did you hold onto a six until this late in the week? Mine are usually gone by Sunday night - Monday at the latest, unless I've been off the site - thank you again!)
Comment from GWinterwin
Another beautiful poem telling of blessings that many each day take for grant-it. The little things in life that we often over look as a blessing. I love the outlook on life in this poem, and just wish more people would realize the little things are blessings in life, as well as the big things.
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Another beautiful poem telling of blessings that many each day take for grant-it. The little things in life that we often over look as a blessing. I love the outlook on life in this poem, and just wish more people would realize the little things are blessings in life, as well as the big things.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2015
Comment from barkingdog
Oh so many beautiful sights and sounds, Dawn. Each stanza has a new surprise. I can see why you don't like reading violence when you have these lovely images flowing through your mind.
I especially like these, most of which have sound:
'He shows me the birth of a small, baby bird;
a toddler saying her very first word. '
'In winter the snowdrifts wear diamonds like Kings,
while swift birds of prey spread their glorious wings'
'... , black velvet to welcome the moon ... the hoot of the owl, and the fence-sitting throng.'
'My feline enjoys that loud cat serenade,
(but she is a housecat, and she has been spayed)! ' Here you show us your sense of humor.
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Oh so many beautiful sights and sounds, Dawn. Each stanza has a new surprise. I can see why you don't like reading violence when you have these lovely images flowing through your mind.
I especially like these, most of which have sound:
'He shows me the birth of a small, baby bird;
a toddler saying her very first word. '
'In winter the snowdrifts wear diamonds like Kings,
while swift birds of prey spread their glorious wings'
'... , black velvet to welcome the moon ... the hoot of the owl, and the fence-sitting throng.'
'My feline enjoys that loud cat serenade,
(but she is a housecat, and she has been spayed)! ' Here you show us your sense of humor.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2015
Comment from sibhus
A good poem that really captures what is really important. The rhymes were great, and they really speak of all that we should appreciate in our day to day lives. The video and the pic really work well with this, Dawn. Good stuff.
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A good poem that really captures what is really important. The rhymes were great, and they really speak of all that we should appreciate in our day to day lives. The video and the pic really work well with this, Dawn. Good stuff.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2015
Comment from Eric1
Hi Dawn, what an uplifting , upbeat and wonderful poem, You truly are a very gifted writer of poetry, this is a cornucopia of all wondrous things that were created by God.
Your rhyming and meter are excellent and the rhythm and flow divine.
Thank you for sharing your awesome talent my friend.
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Hi Dawn, what an uplifting , upbeat and wonderful poem, You truly are a very gifted writer of poetry, this is a cornucopia of all wondrous things that were created by God.
Your rhyming and meter are excellent and the rhythm and flow divine.
Thank you for sharing your awesome talent my friend.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2015
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Wow! So these areca few of your favorite things,eh? To me, this is song worthy. Martina McBride should sing it. I actually thought the piem I reviewed previously was song worthy as well!
I'm sorry I've stayed away so long. What a gift!
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Wow! So these areca few of your favorite things,eh? To me, this is song worthy. Martina McBride should sing it. I actually thought the piem I reviewed previously was song worthy as well!
I'm sorry I've stayed away so long. What a gift!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
Comment from Irish Rain
His work is sublime, and so are your words here. I just love spiritual poetry, and you've covered so many reasons here for gratitude, blessings tonight!
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His work is sublime, and so are your words here. I just love spiritual poetry, and you've covered so many reasons here for gratitude, blessings tonight!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
