Halloween Contest
She Won.11 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous,
I don't think your story is humorous. ~Halloween Contest~ is a short story about 3 people dressed for halloween. One lost her panties. The end.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Hello anonymous,
I don't think your story is humorous. ~Halloween Contest~ is a short story about 3 people dressed for halloween. One lost her panties. The end.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you Gypsy Blue Rose for reading my contest entry.
Jo
Comment from TPAC
Well played writer, smooth operator, I like this sway, finding lines well structured, illustrating writer keen wit and obvious humor -same thing happened at airport while I worked security, but she didn't pick hers' up, I reacted trashing them before anyone noticed
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Well played writer, smooth operator, I like this sway, finding lines well structured, illustrating writer keen wit and obvious humor -same thing happened at airport while I worked security, but she didn't pick hers' up, I reacted trashing them before anyone noticed
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you TPAC for commenting on my contest entry.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a really cute story, but it does not meet the contest requirements as it is only 49 words. I put it through Word for a count and then counted again manually and you are one word short. I hope you can fix this before the committee looks at it since it is a well done piece. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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This is a really cute story, but it does not meet the contest requirements as it is only 49 words. I put it through Word for a count and then counted again manually and you are one word short. I hope you can fix this before the committee looks at it since it is a well done piece. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Ahhh, and I counted twice and used my word counter on computer. Thanks for commenting.
Jo
Comment from Dean Kuch
Uh, yeah. Of course she won. Especially if the judges were comprised mostly of men. Heck, I would'a voted for her, no doubt. Of course, vampires have a mysterious sort of sexy allure themselves. N-a-h-h-h-h-h-h, it would be the hooker for me, hands down. Heh-heh...
Good luck! ~Dean ;)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Uh, yeah. Of course she won. Especially if the judges were comprised mostly of men. Heck, I would'a voted for her, no doubt. Of course, vampires have a mysterious sort of sexy allure themselves. N-a-h-h-h-h-h-h, it would be the hooker for me, hands down. Heh-heh...
Good luck! ~Dean ;)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thanks Dean for your review and comments on my contest entry. Yes, we thought it was rather funny at the time.
Jo
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I'll bet. :)
Comment from barkingdog
I hope that wasn't true. If so, how hysterically embarrassing. Trying to look sexy doesn't work if you're underwear falls down. Now, if she were soliciting, she'd attract a lot of customers.
Funny entry. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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I hope that wasn't true. If so, how hysterically embarrassing. Trying to look sexy doesn't work if you're underwear falls down. Now, if she were soliciting, she'd attract a lot of customers.
Funny entry. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for reviewing my contest entry. Yes, it did happen. We had a few drinks prior to the event...thought it
was funny.
Jo
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, Are you saying that the woman dressed as a lady of the night is the one who bent over and perhaps mooned everyone?
Interesting.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Hmm, Are you saying that the woman dressed as a lady of the night is the one who bent over and perhaps mooned everyone?
Interesting.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Lancellot you have a devious mind. :o) She is a tall girl and with her platform heels about six feet four inches tall. We
thought it was a hoot. She only smiled, bent over and picked up her underwear. It happened so fast one had to be
very quick to have seen anything. :o)
Comment from rjuselius
i don't quite get this one, the elastic band means what? could you just try to open it a bit up because it is hard of the reader to follow. however i does suck you into its world.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
good luck!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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i don't quite get this one, the elastic band means what? could you just try to open it a bit up because it is hard of the reader to follow. however i does suck you into its world.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
good luck!
rebekka x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Sorry Rebekka that you did not get the story. It was a contest in which only 50 words could be used with no author
notes. The elastic band is around the waist of the panties. It holds them up.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow. You did it. You told us a complete story - with a rather unexpected ending - in just a few words. It was definitely humorous! Very well written.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Wow. You did it. You told us a complete story - with a rather unexpected ending - in just a few words. It was definitely humorous! Very well written.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you Michael for reviewing my contest entry. I am glad you saw the humor.
Jo
Comment from rspoet
All part of the plan or costume
or should I say costume failure
Nothing like an attention getter
Easy to see why she won
She could have the vampire, cat or lady
and would still have won.
Great little story
Well done Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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All part of the plan or costume
or should I say costume failure
Nothing like an attention getter
Easy to see why she won
She could have the vampire, cat or lady
and would still have won.
Great little story
Well done Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you for commenting on my story and wishes for good luck in the contest.
Jo
Comment from Eric1
Hi mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition, This story paints an hilarious picture of disaster, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Hi mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition, This story paints an hilarious picture of disaster, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you Eric for commenting on my contest entry and the well wishes.
Jo
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It was my pleasure Jo.
